wow lol, this really got serious didnt it lol. I still havent seen
one good one yet but it was fun lol.

I Thank You now,
"Sweet Country Girl",
the poem you wrote,
was one"GOOD" pearl,
it was only meant, for games and fun,
but these words we write,are far from done,
you may play this game, more than once,
but please don't take us,to be a dunce,
we do not write,any words of hate
only games,to sharpen,and FEEL,,,GREAT,
from th heart,this is the deal,of late,
this "CROWN" to claim,is not for glory,
it's not for fame,only story,
braggin'rights for all to see,
this poem post's, not just for me,
I liked your poem,I felt it too,
showed your heart,we saw you true,
but this is a "DUEL" of poems,you see,
if you beg out,the "Crown's to me,
I welcome all,who come to call,
sink or swim,no time to stall,
I will sit down,for other's now,
to write some poems,show us how,
if you make it far,then get back to me,
then I'll tip my hat,and we will see,
take me thru,the mind of pure,
the heart of true,the poems of lure,
tell me now,you may clown,or just sit down,
you are welcome,please,try n take this "Crown",
for at this time,no other takers,
they just play, with baby makers,
write with us on this page,
come and take, your center stage,
exit stage right,was fun for me,
the floor is open,for all to see,
write your poem,don't hesitate,
try not to hate,don't castigate,
the floor is yours,to have a try,
but for now,I will say "BYE BYE"...............M.

So many wondeerfull poeple allplaying the same game
poetry is an expression its not allways the same
a definition of charactor if you will
for some more than others writing is a thrill
I allways save the best for last and this is far from over
the crown we speak of is only for poetry lovers
The bragging right for one or for all
when the challenege was made who came to the call
I dont stand alone thats easy to see
but the friends i have made mean the world to me

this is he who speaks th truth,
write your poems oh frightened youth...

Do not complain
About the poems that you see
This was strictly a game
They were written with glee
Please do not act
Like yer the only one
That's reading these poems
This thread was for fun
If you don't like
What yer reading in here
Then shut the F**K UP
And get me a beer

here i sit
with my silly grin
this was the shit
and has yet to end

the ref is back lol

I looked all over
the whole wide world
for something I needed
so bad, you see.
I wished, I hoped,
I prayed for someone
that I could find
to love and who would
love me. I spent so
many days, I cried so
many tears. I thought
this search would never
end, seemed like it lasted
for years.
Then I opened my eyes....
You were right there in front of me!
All this wasted time
I spent looking and
you were right there in front of me.
Many ships I sailed,
many miles I walked
in foreign lands and
all I needed to do was
look into your loving
eyes and feel the soft skin
of your outreached hands.
Call me a fool if you
will but I now a fool
in love with you.
I wouldn't have it
any other way!
Baby dance with me,
let's make love
under a waterfall.
I want to make up
for each second I missed
you. I want to experience
it all. I want to lose
myself in you.

that was good the judge claps lol

bravo
i'll write a good one later busy trying to work atm lol

dont lie lunatic your thinking.. we know it

"JIMI" I really do,tip my hat to you,
th poems you write,are really tight,
you make me feel so very right,
these duels we see for all to "fight"
to excersize our right to write,,,
you may go to th second round,
to fight again,on level ground,
please, oh youth,continue this sweetest fight...

lol ya'll need a new hobby and i need a deck built. So if youre not
busy fly on over and get to work.

i was gonna say something but i cant its to mean

mandii -didnt know we were having a poem contest again.

mandi go ahead and say it i dont need to build my deck, i pay ppl to do
that stuff for me. thats what i do for a living, I try to do the least
amount of physical work possible lol.

no i was gonna say ill hire a mexican to mow your lawn while the decks
going thats how it is in my area

dee dee dee

your like the twin sister i never had.....maybe youre my 'soul mate"
that i hear so much about lmfknao

then again we aint in kentucky so a sister/soulmate thing wouldnt
work....