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Sun 05/18/14 09:07 AM
Topic: Do u think Sex is necessary for this age....
I need intimacy, communication, honesty and butterflies in my belly, then sex. It's a shared experience based on attraction initially, but made memorable by establishing a relationship first. And, yes, women over 50 need sex, too.
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Sat 04/26/14 01:13 PM
Topic: looking for a right women
I took the time to look at your profile. Although you say you are looking for the "right" woman, your pic and profile's words ("nice package") shout you are looking for Miss Right Now!
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Sat 04/26/14 01:13 PM
Topic: looking for a right women
I took the time to look at your profile. Although you say you are looking for the "right" woman, your pic and profile's words ("nice package") shout you are looking for Miss Right Now!
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Wed 04/16/14 12:51 AM
Topic: The Geography of a Woman vs a that of a man
Lol
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Wed 04/16/14 12:23 AM
Topic: if you forget me...
Beautiful.
Made me ache with longing for my undiscovered "beloved."
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Sun 04/13/14 09:47 AM
Topic: Wild Magic
Love your subject and your word choices, especially "wondrous wild magic"!
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Sun 04/13/14 09:36 AM
Topic: O' Winterbourne. Dry streams In a Daybed Calling . . .
Aye. Tommyboy, you have indeed captured the image of a precocious river. Question: is it that you desire to "dance on thimbles, dance on stone/Balance erect upon your throne..."?
(Those are my favorite lines!)
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Sun 04/13/14 09:26 AM
Topic: Broken
Although your poem is well written and points to a sad truth for some, I prefer to bend, not break!
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Wed 04/09/14 03:18 AM
Topic: love
Love the flow of this piece! And what theme could be more universal?!
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Wed 04/09/14 03:12 AM
Topic: Mother's Day
flowerforyou
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Wed 04/09/14 03:08 AM
Topic: Wind blown Shadows
This left me wanting more!
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Wed 04/09/14 03:07 AM
Topic: Wild Flower
Lovely spring image!
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Fri 04/04/14 11:16 PM
Topic: Body Cravings AKA Sex with the Ex
Satisfying read and let excellent rhythm! My only suggestion is to correct your pronoun shift from first to third person...but that's a small thing.
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Fri 04/04/14 11:12 PM
Topic: O' Catchy Phraseology ( tommy boy moran )
Playing with words still? Glad that you are!
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Thu 12/05/13 07:00 PM
Topic: When The Sugar Momma Talks
Thanks for the link to YouTube! It's always enlightening to hear the poet read his own verse (enjoyed the harmonica, too!)
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Wed 12/04/13 09:06 PM
Topic: The Lesson Man
I closely identify with your sentiment and experience. As my mama always said, "Bend. Don't break."
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Wed 12/04/13 08:55 PM
Topic: My Poetry is my song...The Secret Place
Just beautiful.
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Wed 12/04/13 08:53 PM
Topic: "You were too smart and too sensitive for your own good."
Best part of this piece for me is "you hide behind the lettuce you won't swallow/and the bills you never pay, /damning the world." Think I recognized some people!
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Wed 12/04/13 08:41 PM
Topic: When The Sugar Momma Talks
Loved the trip through a rivetting blues song. Great imagery drew me in to its spell.
Encore!
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Sat 11/30/13 08:09 AM
Topic: As I Advance Myself . . .
As usual, your writing solicits an emotional response, especially during the holiday season when are missing loved ones dominate our thoughts.
Hope all is well with you!
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