Topic: When The Sugar Momma Talks | |
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When The Sugar Momma Talks
If ever there was a slow sultry train sensually bending soul minors, chugging upon the spine, taking it'��s riders from a flooding delta to alpine woods where goose bumps rise, drown, and resurrect in the forget of a sexy minute. Teased just right with soft air sucked in tight and lazy on the curl of a tongue, thin brass wisps resonate in twisting hips; pendulum swings, while a blues man sings; "She'��s a gypsy with a mojo; honey lips steal good men away she'��s a gypsy with a mojo; honey lips steel good men away A fool calls her Pandora I don't call her any day." Guitar or harp continues talking where the vocals stop. Gypsy vapor sinks beneath rind; honey tastes like a thousand tingles moving from soft kisses between skin and skull, to restless air that follows bones - makes them shake. We want more when we hear the sputter of a turn on the five. The crawling out of dark pipes begins, through steel grates, along ditches, ally walls trying to slide in the creep of a hot blue measure for another twelve bars that may forever hang, perpetually arousing, suspended on the one. Then the sugar momma may finally speak and tell us where she gets her sugar from. RKL - me... |
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i like it.
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Loved the trip through a rivetting blues song. Great imagery drew me in to its spell.
Encore! |
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Hey thanks Lorena and Liz. I have a Youtube Video Soundtrack I put together with me playing harmonica and narrating the spoken word. We put together all sorts of sounds to go with the poem to make it really stand out.
Many of the folks in that video are musicians I have played with in the Dallas Blues scene. Some nationally known. My friends and Son is in it for a flash. I did all the editing and worked cooperatively in a studio with a sound tech on the soundtrack. Please go see and let me know what you think. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wnCq-IdiVZM I hope it is ok to post the link here? If not you can search the title and it should show up on You tube. |
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Thanks for the link to YouTube! It's always enlightening to hear the poet read his own verse (enjoyed the harmonica, too!)
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Pretty Dope.
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Thanks much Literaryliz!!
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