literaryliz


literaryliz Joined Thu 09/26/13 Posts: 26	Tue 10/22/13 08:58 AM Topic: What You've Lost
Good perspective and great rhythm!

literaryliz Joined Thu 09/26/13 Posts: 26	Sun 10/20/13 08:56 AM Topic: War (A Free-Verse Poem About a Soldier)
You speak of two of man's universal concerns-war and dying alone with perception. I especially like the line "cuts filled with another man's soil."

literaryliz Joined Thu 09/26/13 Posts: 26	Sun 10/20/13 02:34 AM Topic: An Irishman's Creed ( At The Sounding of The Bell )
Your poem made me think. Eerie, threatening, yet comforting.

literaryliz Joined Thu 09/26/13 Posts: 26	Sun 10/20/13 02:34 AM Topic: An Irishman's Creed ( At The Sounding of The Bell )
Your poem made me think. Eerie, threatening, yet comforting.

literaryliz Joined Thu 09/26/13 Posts: 26	Sun 10/20/13 02:26 AM Topic: Cold Lake, Warm Hearth (short story)
Thanks, JRonin! I needed a re-affirmation of love, which is what your story did for me. Waiting for part II!