Topic: Body Cravings AKA Sex with the Ex | |
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Edited by
youngasufeel
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Thu 04/03/14 04:38 AM
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" Take your clothes off," she says
"And Let's not talk." The chemistry between us Has always been hot. I'd know your touch In a dark crowded room; Especially after a period Of remorseful, sexless gloom. Touch me in places Where no one else knows; Touch me in places Where no one else goes. Take control of my body And breathe it back to life; We shall not talk There will be no strife. We'll do the thing That we do best; Let our bodies unite With fervor and zest. They'll feed upon each other With an uncanny greed; Each one knowing What the other one needs. We've been together For far too long; To ignore this dance They're playing our song. |
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Satisfying read and let excellent rhythm! My only suggestion is to correct your pronoun shift from first to third person...but that's a small thing.
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" Take your clothes off," she says "And Let's not talk." The chemistry between us Has always been hot. I'd know your touch In a dark crowded room; Especially after a period Of remorseful, sexless gloom. Touch me in places Where no one else knows; Touch me in places Where no one else goes. Take control of my body And breathe it back to life; We shall not talk There will be no strife. We'll do the thing That we do best; Let our bodies unite With fervor and zest. They'll feed upon each other With an uncanny greed; Each one knowing What the other one needs. We've been together For far too long; To ignore this dance They're playing our song. |
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