Topic: My Poetry is my song...The Secret Place
doinitagain's photo
Tue 12/03/13 09:21 PM
Edited by doinitagain on Tue 12/03/13 09:24 PM
Secret Place

You poured out your heart,
without fears
as if cool rain, giving
in dusty heat.
I wade deep
in those pools
spilling in the harmonious
babble bubbling;
Mirror of your soul;
shades of paradise,
the lotus cupped in His hands,
between us -
white call to greater abandon
where we
take on new meaning;
Tears of joy welling
from the dark tempest
in my core;
souls undressed
as if a sun
cut through clouds;
your giving rain,
the inevitable tears,
us wading there,
in that secret place.

By Doinitagain

pkh's photo
Wed 12/04/13 06:24 AM
Very nice

doinitagain's photo
Wed 12/04/13 08:17 AM
Thanks very much!!

literaryliz's photo
Wed 12/04/13 08:55 PM
Just beautiful.

doinitagain's photo
Sat 12/07/13 04:48 PM
Thank you!!