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Looks may be what starts feelings toward another
but in the end it's personality. Looks fade rather
quickly but a good personality lasts forever.

You write about sex darkly too! I love your writing.

I think you did the right thing. This guy you're talking
about invented the phrase "player". Don't worry yourself
over him and find someone who really loves you.
Jim

You came in the night as you said you would.
You came in and took my heart.
You ARE the cream that I desire.
You are sweeter than candy.
I could never walk away
from someone so sensual.
I scream your name in
the night as we make love
under the moonlight.
You leave me breathless
and begging for more.

What an erotic poem! You sure got my blood flowing.
I have a website for poetry www.soulsgate.com
and would love to see you post there.
Jim

"I know by now that you ain't no angel, but
at least I thought you cared."
Jimi366

I can't feel a thing.
I am so fucking numb.
Can't believe I played the fool again.
I am so fucking dumb.
Take the knife made of your words
and plunge deep inside of me.
Draw my blood and watch it
flow until I have no more.
Watch me die from your words baby.
What started out as love
has turned into a cruel joke.
What happened to the person
I first fell in love with?
Did you dance with the devil?
I know by now you ain't no angel
but at least I thought you cared.
Baby, hit me with your best shot,
go ahead and knock me out.
Put me out of my misery.
You've prooved you can't
show me love, instead
you show me misery.
I guess that's better
than showing indifference.
I drifting off to sleep now, my love.
You took everything I have to give.

Great artistic expression
and great writing.
I loved it!

I have a website and if you'd like to write on it
I would be deeply honored.

www.soulsgate.com

CCP you write dark and you know how I love dark writing.
Jim

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Ontario,
Check your mail.

If you have money then Bush has been a great president.
If you are middle class or poor Bush has been terrible.
I voted for Bush twice but I regret it now.
Bush only cares about the rich.
Under Bush we've been introduced to outsourcing
and using illegal aliens as cheap labor.
Bush is selling us to Hell in a handbasket.
Bush has made foreign policy his top priority
and put domestic policy on the back burner.
The economy may be booming right now but all I
hear everyday from people is how tight money is.
The rich keep getting richer.
I'm willing to bet that there is a mess
Bush is making that will have to be cleaned
up by the next person to be president.
If not for 9/11 Bush would be a mediocre president
at best.

happy=stoned

Oh Nestle, sweet Nestle
thank God that you're here.
I have a tooth for sweets
and only you can help me.
Toll House, Chips Ahoy,
I couldn't give a shit.
I am just damn hungry
for chocolate chips.

I have a poetry challenge for all the writers out
there. I will give you a subject and you
write a poem about it. The subject is-
"A Recipe For Chocolate Chip Cookies"

Very clever and to the point.

Baby that's quite a trick
you pulled. You had me
believing for a second
that you still loved me.
You took my fragile mind
for a spin. You made
a spider web for me to
be stuck in. I could
feel the penetration
of your teeth. You
bitch you feed on me!
Take it all.
Yeah you parasite
take all I have to give.
Take the very heart from
me. Just take it all
and walk away. I won't
cry I won't cry and I
refuse to die. I will
rise again.

What do want from me?
All I can give you
is my blood.
You took everything
that I ever treasured.
You took my ability
to love.
Now I sit here alone
in what used to be
a happy home.
You fucked me over
but I still wanna
feel your touch.
You're like a scorpion.
You wound me then
turn to leave.
Why is it that I
refuse to remember
all that when I
set eyes upon your
beautiful face.
Why do I never see
the ugliness within you?
Broken hearts lay in your
path and all you do
is laugh. Your laughter
haunts me when I lay
down and dream.