On my knees
Begging for release
Writhing, twisting
Just do it
Pull the trigger
Slice the vein
Tighten the noose
There is no salvation
There is no cure
You are what you are
No changing that
Questions unasked
Questions unanswered
On my knees
Begging for immunity
Withing,twisting
Just do it
Swallow the pills
Crash the car
Plunge the needle
There is no salvation
There is no cure
You are what you are
No changing that
Questions unasked
Questions answered
On my knees
Begging for life
Pleading, praying
Don't do it
Think for a minute
Feel for a minute
Look at what will be left behind
There is salvation
There is a cure
You are you, just be true
You can change that
Questions asked
Questions answered

Thats very intense, but great writing.

beautiful words but sad

we come in crying and go out the same ............embrace
Deaf....overcome our Fear!!!!

don't do it "Poet"

we all love you...
and we'll miss you...

good one girl...
*gives her a pat on th back*
*throws her a red rose*

BRAVO!felt it...

Michael I am not committing suicide, I am totally against suicide as I
all oo well know the after effects on the family members left behind,
thats what it is about, its a tough love approach to talking someone
down.

Great artistic expression
and great writing.
I loved it!

sorry,,,was only playing a part,,,
but trying to say nice poem,
I felt your words...Bravo to th poem...