Spinoff from a thought on another thread....

Why is it that 92% of all the profiles I read include the line, "I'm different, I'm not like anybody else you ever met," and then they go on to write the exact same things that are in every other profile on the planet?

Seems to me that truly "different" people wouldn't feel the need to proclaim themselves as such -- who are you trying to convince?

Don't sit there and tell me how different you are -- prove it.

Plagiarizing what's already nothing less than a boilerplate cliche-fest isn't going to do it.

AWESOME!!!

She will

I hope you feel better soon, Daniel...everything happens for a reason, and SHE is out there...you'll see. And I am sure your Mom misses you too....but she's watching you and with God's help, is holding you

{{{{Daniel}}}}

Very endearing Tribute, (((Daniel)))!! Sometimes I feel like that also, after losing my mom!! She was my best friend!! I loved reading this!! Thank You for sharing!

Thank you so much for sharing as I as reading this I was turning it around many different ways. I thought of my grandfather and everything he was to me. You know how much I miss him we have talked about it. I then stopped and pondered am I that kind of Mother to my children. I truely hope so, I also thought of my mom and how we are tentatively building a relationship, I only hope we have the gift of one like yours with your mother.
Great job as usual...

that was so pretty, daniel..makes me think of my mother, how much i miss her so..

The author is angelfire - angelindarkness.


And, thank you.

Written

Written within you, the lines on your face
Telling your story, leaving a trace
Of love that held you, then let you go
Why things happen, you never may know

A heart so loving, giving and dear
Someone has used it, and left you here
Living without, no place to go
Hiding the pain, afraid it will show

Seeing a smile and longing to feel
Afraid to trust that it could be real
All you remember is what's written within
Afraid to release it to begin again

God has brought you the one you desire
He's sending a love that will carry you higher
Written within, is supposed to be
The final page written is of you and me


KLS 01-08-09

It was the type of day made for reticent fun.
Rain was in the forecast and no sign of Sun.
As I looked up in the sky, big drops began to fall.
Picked up the Blackberry Storm, gave my lady a call.

Unfortunately a male voice answered the line.
Now the feeling on my heart is so hard to define.
A very cold chill ran up & back down my spine.
The opposite of sublime described my present frame of mind.

We move forward, drowning in sorrow is now optional.
If there’s a cure for broken heartedness check me in that hospital.
As we know there’s only 1 way to get over this, that’s time.
And we also keep our eyes wide open for that sign.

That 1 telling us it’s okay to go on.
Sometimes we don’t get it for very, very long.
I’m wallowing in the shear agony of deceit.
Pine riding and catching splinters feeling the sharp pain of defeat.

I went for a long walk, crying to unmask my pain.
Fortunately no one could tell because it was pouring down rain.
A good woman is so hard to let go.
I had a bad girl, but brother I just didn’t know.

Now, this isn’t the best look for this once secure fella.
Wow, soaked & walking in the rain with no umbrella.
The perils of trust make us endure so much.
In the breast of contemplation, that unsure first touch.

It was cold the way she did it too, leaving me lone.
Girl had another man answering her cellular phone.
Now I’m prone to madness under the wrong circumstances.
Flailing my arms, jerking my body like I’m doing some Druid dances.

By chance it’s the lonely that never walk by.
Only the couples are what you see when your eyes won’t dry.
Surrounded once by happiness, well at least I thought so.
Thoughts so far from loneliness but I just didn’t know.

{{{{{{Daniel}}}}} Beautiful...as always