Community > Posts By > 2Btrue2One
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For A Friend
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I know for you
life has been tough but God's light shines on you from heaven above Your heart has been broke I can feel your pain so afraid so scared to begin again I know you have cried I have seen your tears you want someone to hold you and drive away your fears Have courage take heart the love that you seek is not very far But until you see it I will always be near I will stand with you my friend because you are so very dear With love and kindness and a heart that's true whenever you need me I will be there for you Lift your head up and smile my dear let me softly dry your tears Take my hand my dear sweet friend let me help your heart to mend By Daniel 05/05/08 |
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Phoenix Rises
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An excellent description of the Phoenix rising from the ashes..
Nice poem Gaia |
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Neverwas
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Daniel at your service my dear.. let me at him... very nice poem hiker
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Prayer
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You are so very welcome Angel.. blessings on you M'Lady..
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please do not be brutal
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For someone whom hasn't written in a while, I believe you did an excellent job.. very good poem.. keep them comming, we are all like family here and enjoy reading and writing poetry.. welcome to the poetry forum..
I'm Daniel |
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In My Small Hands
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That was very lovely.. a beautiful poem..
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*@%#$&@*
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awww, MsTeddy, my prayers are with you.. Praying you get better soon..
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Prayer
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let the water rush over me, like the tide coming in from sea cover me in waves of light, like the sun shining down on me open my heart to its destiny, to fulfill Your every need listen to my Soul meditate, as it contemplates humanity may I honor every teardrop rolling down a reddened cheek raise me up to higher ground, to touch sky and mountain peak give me wisdom to hold the Truth as I wander and I seek bless my tongue and my lips, so I am kind before I speak hold me close within Your care, and let me know Your presence have me live within Your Love to reflect Your sacred essence show me paths of hope and joy so I can share Your residence consecrate my willing Spirit so it may fly to where it's sent JDS 05/03/08 Absolutely beautiful.. In Jesus Mighty Name Amen |
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Take Me Away
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great write!! I like this one!! Thank you Red.. |
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Take Me Away
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Daniel I really enjoyed this one. nice- thank you You are welcome, and thank you |
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Ecstasy
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it was a nice write Daniel - honestly not one of my favorites but it was good luv ya babe Thank you giggles... |
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~A Justified Journey~
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The two of you belong to a special breed and class of poets ( one among many on here)I love to see the creative side of anyone but particularly enjoy works for you two Such a nice thing to say Bonny, thank you, and i'm sure Cy will be honored as well... |
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Take Me Away
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Beautiful write, reinforces contentment and assurance. Nicely done Thank you Bonny, always nice to recieve comments from you on my poems.. glad you liked it.. And thanks to everyone else that replied AngelLight MsTeddy Cypoet All of you have my utmost respect |
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Ecstasy
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Why thank you Bonny
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Help me please
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Oh and be carful on that road my friend.. I pray the Lord sends his Angel with you making sure you safely come back to all of us..
In Jesus Mighty Name Amen |
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Help me please
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Beautifully written Terry.. and we have faith that our Lord hears us and will give us all the strength necessary to stand..
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Ecstasy
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lol... well I figured I would give it a try.. this is my second one like this....
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Love Me
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Love me in the Springtime, when all is green and new, Love me in the Summer, when the sky is oh so blue, Love me in the Autumn, when the leaves are turning brown, Love me in the Winter, when the snow is falling down. Love me when I'm happy, and even when I'm sad, Love me when I'm good, or when I'm oh so bad, Love me when I'm pretty, or if my face is plain, Love me when I'm feeling good, or when I'm feeling pain. Love me always darlin', in the rain or shining sun, Love me always darlin', after all is said and done, Love me always darlin', until all our life is through, Love me always darlin', for I'll be lovin' you! Always!! awww, such a beautiful poem.. I see your heart in it, and it really touched me.. very very nice, and heart felt.. |
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Take Me Away
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Beautiful, written so eloquently Thank you Gaia.. that name is the earth sighn isn't it?.. earth wind and fire.. Yes it is I am the mother, the fire of desire, the wind of discontent I am Gaia If I remember correctly, Gaia is in control of all the elements, and influences human behaivior, love, passion, romance.. correct me if i'm wrong.. |
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Take Me Away
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Beautiful, written so eloquently Thank you Gaia.. that name is the earth sighn isn't it?.. earth wind and fire.. |
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