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Sat 05/03/08 03:20 PM

Danielson...I loved it simplly loved it....awesome write sweetie pie:wink: :heart:


As always your thoughts and comments are welcome..
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Sat 05/03/08 03:18 PM

Great write Danielson...felt like i was there while reading it...:wink: Of course I love all the poems you write...heheheblushing


Thank you sas, at least one reply..flowerforyou

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Sat 05/03/08 11:10 AM
awww, Terry, I feel for your friend.. and offer her my friendship.. let her know she has people here that care..
A nice way to honor her by writing this my friend..

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Sat 05/03/08 10:55 AM


A beautiful poem of courage and bravery.. and a heart for the meek.. very well written Cy..drinker

Thx!bro.I feel deeply honored 2 hear them words from U.For U are another 1 of the great writers within our beautiful poetic home place.I've read much of your work btw & I enjoy your writing tremendously.U have such brilliant prose & U express yourself beautifully.Only a man w/a fine heart & soul possesses the ability 2 write & express oneself in this manner.We are all extremely grateful 4 your talent & ur generosity to wards us all.Godspeed!Cydrinker :smile: drinker


Wow, I didn't know I had that kind of an impact.. Thank you for making me aware of it.. I just speak from what's in my heart, and you my friend are a great writer as well.. Poetry is something I love to read and write, believe it or not, I didn't even know I had this talent until my ex and I split up..which will be a year on the 11th of this month, I went through the most horrible pain because of that, along with watching my mother die two months prior to the break up.. I needed a way to release the pain, and God gave me this gift as a way of doing it..

We poets I believe are a special breed, we write poems that inspire people, help them to smile, bring a joyful tear, or a sad one depending on the poem... we take then away on journeys through the mind.. it's our gift to them.. Thank you Cy:smile: drinker

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Sat 05/03/08 10:37 AM
Nice one Robert.. yes The Lord is always there when we need him, even when we are at our lowest point in life and it seems like he isn't, he is.. Thank you for this poem Robert..
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Sat 05/03/08 10:33 AM
very nice Sharris.. a little sad..but nice.. you ok girl..

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Sat 05/03/08 10:24 AM

You are right "T"
WHen you love someone you should be able to open enough to communicate your likes and dislikes. When it comes to movies, dinner or yes even making love.
SOmeone who truly loves you from the inside out will WANT to please you and even ask what you desire and that goes both ways.
You figure you have the rest of your lives together to get it right -ey? So practice makes perfect.!!!

Sex is mechanical and selfish it gratifies but only for a few moments- making love is a bond that should only bring you closer together not with just body parts but with mind, spirit and soul.


Terry, I don't believe I could have said anything better than what she just did... cheers my friend..drinker drinker

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Sat 05/03/08 10:17 AM
A beautiful poem of courage and bravery.. and a heart for the meek.. very well written Cy..drinker

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Sat 05/03/08 10:13 AM
very eloquently written as always MsWizard...
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Sat 05/03/08 09:59 AM

Daniel, be careful,,,,,,,THESE ladies MIGHT start seeing you with your clothes offnoway lol,OH NEVER-MIND...lol,lol
Just kiddin ya Bro. Nice write......drinker :heart:


laugh Thanks Terry, drinker

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Sat 05/03/08 09:58 AM

"Time seems to stop"


Isn't that the truth! :smile: flowerforyou :heart:


AngelLight.. glad to see you comment on one of my poems...
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Sat 05/03/08 09:56 AM

"Kissing and caressing
in total ecstasy
nothing else exsists
except for you and me"

Oh Daniel....lovely! flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou


MsWizard, glad you enjoyed it..flowerforyou :heart:

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Sat 05/03/08 09:55 AM
Thank you Sexyflowerforyou
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Cypoetdrinker

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Sat 05/03/08 07:53 AM
Thank you Red..flowerforyou

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Sat 05/03/08 07:47 AM
Physical attraction
you have it all there
you look my way
we both begin to stare

Like reading each others thoughts
undressing each other in both our minds
erotic thoughts of ecstasy
as we bigin to walk closer
at the very same time

Smiling with desire
our eyes begin to glow
sensual erotic passion
begins to over flow

We know what we both want
in our minds it's very clear
emotions running wildly
as the time is drawing near

I begin to kiss your lips
slowly working my way down
heavy breathing sensual moaning
is the only sound

Off with the clothes
the moment begins to heat
skin touching skin
as our bodies meet

Hearts pounding wildly
as the love making begins
neither of us wanting
this moment to ever end

Kissing and caressing
in total ecstasy
nothing else exsists
except for you and me

Time seems to stop
reality no longer exsists
except the sharing os ourselves
in pure blissfulness

By Daniel
05/03/08

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Sat 05/03/08 04:33 AM
Very well said.. meditation is a way of calming the spirit..flowerforyou

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Sat 05/03/08 03:50 AM
Take me away
come into me
let me show you how love
can be in perfect harmony

Take my hand
give me a chance
let me show you the passion
of true romance

Let't come together
let me kiss your lips
let me softly touch you
with my finger tips

Let me take you places
that you've never been
let me show you my heart
and what lay within

Trust in me
be more than a friend
I will always be by your side
untill the very end

Take another look
are you sure it's not me
can you say i'm not the one
with all certainty

Lean on me
anytime you need
it's ok my darling
I have plenty of strength

Just come to me
anytime you want to talk
because I will always stand with you
and never let you fall

By Daniel
5/03/08

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Sat 05/03/08 03:38 AM
Very well put, all of us have suffered tremendous pain in our lives i'm sure...drinker

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Fri 05/02/08 06:31 AM
A very nice tribute to us men, thank you kristi, to bad a lot of us real men get overlooked though.. nice one..
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Fri 05/02/08 04:13 AM

A tightness in my chest
and this yearning in my heart
what your doing to me
is tearing me apart

I wish that I could show you
tell you
what you mean to me
but no matter what I say or do
the truth,you'll never see

So what choices can I make
you just don't understand

I was ment to be your woman,
but you'll never be my man.


Awwww, sweetie.. have you told him how you feel? He might feel the same way..

Daniel<----- kindly lends his shoulder if you need it..flowerforyou

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