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MisKim323 Joined Sat 06/28/08 Posts: 14563	Wed 01/07/09 09:33 PM
Written Written within you, the lines on your face Telling your story, leaving a trace Of love that held you, then let you go Why things happen, you never may know A heart so loving, giving and dear Someone has used it, and left you here Living without, no place to go Hiding the pain, afraid it will show Seeing a smile and longing to feel Afraid to trust that it could be real All you remember is what's written within Afraid to release it to begin again God has brought you the one you desire He's sending a love that will carry you higher Written within, is supposed to be The final page written is of you and me KLS 01-08-09

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Wed 01/07/09 09:35 PM
Written Written within you, the lines on your face Telling your story, leaving a trace Of love that held you, then let you go Why things happen, you never may know A heart so loving, giving and dear Someone has used it, and left you here Living without, no place to go Hiding the pain, afraid it will show Seeing a smile and longing to feel Afraid to trust that it could be real All you remember is what's written within Afraid to release it to begin again God has brought you the one you desire He's sending a love that will carry you higher Written within, is supposed to be The final page written is of you and me KLS 01-08-09 nice

MisKim323 Joined Sat 06/28/08 Posts: 14563	Wed 01/07/09 09:36 PM
Thank you Mirror

Winx Joined Fri 08/31/07 Posts: 39051	Wed 01/07/09 09:52 PM
That's good, MisKim.

MisKim323 Joined Sat 06/28/08 Posts: 14563	Thu 01/08/09 12:45 AM
That's good, MisKim. Thank you Sweetie....glad you liked it

2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Thu 01/08/09 12:53 AM
Written Written within you, the lines on your face Telling your story, leaving a trace Of love that held you, then let you go Why things happen, you never may know A heart so loving, giving and dear Someone has used it, and left you here Living without, no place to go Hiding the pain, afraid it will show Seeing a smile and longing to feel Afraid to trust that it could be real All you remember is what's written within Afraid to release it to begin again God has brought you the one you desire He's sending a love that will carry you higher Written within, is supposed to be The final page written is of you and me KLS 01-08-09 Very nice Kim

aries43 Joined Sun 11/02/08 Posts: 68	Thu 01/08/09 01:40 AM Edited by aries43 on Thu 01/08/09 01:42 AM
really like this. thank you, very beautiful

MisKim323 Joined Sat 06/28/08 Posts: 14563	Thu 01/08/09 05:27 AM
Written Written within you, the lines on your face Telling your story, leaving a trace Of love that held you, then let you go Why things happen, you never may know A heart so loving, giving and dear Someone has used it, and left you here Living without, no place to go Hiding the pain, afraid it will show Seeing a smile and longing to feel Afraid to trust that it could be real All you remember is what's written within Afraid to release it to begin again God has brought you the one you desire He's sending a love that will carry you higher Written within, is supposed to be The final page written is of you and me KLS 01-08-09 Very nice Kim {{{{Daniel}}}}

MisKim323 Joined Sat 06/28/08 Posts: 14563	Thu 01/08/09 05:28 AM
really like this. thank you, very beautiful

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Thu 01/08/09 06:27 AM
What a wonderful write MisKim

MisKim323 Joined Sat 06/28/08 Posts: 14563	Thu 01/08/09 06:35 AM
What a wonderful write MisKim Aww....you always say that....and thank you Sweetie

d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Thu 01/08/09 06:40 AM
A heart to heart moment. Remarkle. Love the last line. Nicely said.

MisKim323 Joined Sat 06/28/08 Posts: 14563	Thu 01/08/09 06:44 AM
A heart to heart moment. Remarkle. Love the last line. Nicely said. You make me blush....so many compliments from those I admire so

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Thu 01/08/09 06:53 AM
Beautiful write Happy New Year gf.

Winx Joined Fri 08/31/07 Posts: 39051	Thu 01/08/09 09:42 AM
That's good, MisKim. Thank you Sweetie....glad you liked it I did. Thank you for sharing.

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Thu 01/08/09 09:44 AM
beautiful write

MisKim323 Joined Sat 06/28/08 Posts: 14563	Thu 01/08/09 12:49 PM
beautiful write

MisKim323 Joined Sat 06/28/08 Posts: 14563	Sat 01/10/09 06:55 AM
Beautiful write Happy New Year gf. Happy New year to you Sweetie...haven't been on lately and when I am it is for a short time...have missed you all

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