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Always
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You really write beautiful phrases that capture a whole story in a few words..."I land in familiar territory", "like fruit to the vine". Very nice writing - a pleasure to read.
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Through Infinity
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Nice poem...really evokes the feeling of the situation you describe.
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... When I was Beautiful ...
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What a lovely poem. The way you use "when I was beautiful" repetively is very effective in drawing one back to the sense of the earlier time and building up a sense of longing for that time.
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Will You Weep
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You use words skillfully ... I appreciate the art of doing that.
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Breath Of Life
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You have such beautiful imagery in the poem ... Thank you; I enjoyed reading it.
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Topic:
A Tree
Edited by
CitiGurl
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Wed 05/20/09 07:01 PM
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ArtGurl, That is one beautiful picture....thank you. Do you think we are related? CitiGurl 
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Lacy
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Lovely use of sensory imagery!
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valentine
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In our human existence love appears to slip through our fingers … through no fault … just life and circumstances. A nice reminder that in some time and space beyond our immediate experience, it persists.
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Mary and Andrew
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I've known some women in their 80's who lost babies when they were young, and yes for them it is "as if yesterday"; they remember every smile, every cry. A very tender poem.
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Before Our Eyes
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Interesting poem … I like your comment about the horizon as a portal. The fearless and the explorer have always seen it that way, yet so many see the horizon as the limit of their world.
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For My Beloved
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Nice poem... there is a sense of movement ... like a dance filling a stage with grace and motion.
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With All That Is
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Good poem ... the last line captures what I think is real love. It goes where it goes because it acts from its own nature, independent of the transient characteristics of place or person, seeking neither invitation nor reciprocity. Perhaps love sees what we are often incapable of seeing?
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Topic:
Nike
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There are no extra words in your poem, yet you fill the page with an image and mood...not an easy thing to do.
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Topic:
“Place in Life”
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A beautiful poem....you capture the reality of living...that lives aren't perfect, but that's OK...we can make peace with the past and find satisfaction with where we have been and where we are.
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Topic:
Silence
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AngelLight,
I’ve read some of your poems and now I understand the range of your writing. Only when someone is comfortable with silence can they contemplate the complexity of life and understand the true nature of Love, and what it really asks of us. Regards, CitiGurl |
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