Topic: Breath Of Life
poeticflight's photo
Tue 05/19/09 07:37 PM
Sweet is the breath of life. Yes... a simple breath. In that breath you taste her essence. So alive .... I search for words that describe this feeling.

How does the wind carress ones soul? How does the thunder become ones heart beat?
How do tears of past become the river that washes away the pain of broken hearts?

It is that breath of life. That sweet sweet whisper " I Love You ". Whispered into your ear and felt throughout your body. Thundering hearts beating as one while you embrace. And all the pains of past are washed away as you look into her eyes and know.... you are loved.

Yes ... I love you is no longer a phrase. It is a new existance. It is the rose bud opening to share its beauty with a world searching.... dreaming... craving... longing for lifes purpose.

Love is lifes purpose. When you find it.... hold it close. Feel the emotions and embrace it. Nothing in the world is stronger, more powerful, as beautiful, or more valuable than true love.

Looks change with time, Money made and lost, things misplaced, stolen, or worn out. When all things are gone.... true love still stands strong. Nothing or no person can ever take true love from two souls. It is the dream.... the fantasy... it is forever. I am alive.

So so sweet is her breath of life..... Heaven on earth.

Forever

Diamond4ever's photo
Tue 05/19/09 07:52 PM
Gorgeous! flowers



"Love is lifes purpose......When all things are gone.... true love still stands..."

No truer words spoken, and spoken so beautifully pf.


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Tue 05/19/09 08:00 PM
flowerforyou

AngelLight's photo
Tue 05/19/09 08:14 PM
Beyond beautiful flowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Wed 05/20/09 08:46 AM
Beautiful flowerforyou

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Wed 05/20/09 07:22 PM
You have such beautiful imagery in the poem ... Thank you; I enjoyed reading it.

poeticflight's photo
Thu 05/21/09 03:17 PM
I am glad you like my writing. Thanks so much for your replies.