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Topic: Lacy
Gossipmpm Joined Tue 03/03/09 Posts: 19414	Mon 05/18/09 08:53 AM
We kissed After hours of talk You tasted Like a freshley baked Sugar cookie I became crazy Wanting to crawl into your arms And lay upon your breast The erotica of you The way you touch With such gentleness And nurturing Your skin so soft Your smell so good Your kindness So warm When you say goodbye And close the door You take My Soul As A Woman Tammy. 5/09

Ragnorak Joined Sat 05/16/09 Posts: 36	Mon 05/18/09 09:25 AM
As a man that can take your heart, take your soul and take your mind, and in my spot of being me, being a man, and as a man that can give you his heart, gives you his soul and gives you his mind and then we might be man and woman

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Mon 05/18/09 10:55 AM
Another tender write... Nice job Tammy

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Mon 05/18/09 12:38 PM
great write

Gossipmpm Joined Tue 03/03/09 Posts: 19414	Mon 05/18/09 04:32 PM
Thank you

CitiGurl Joined Wed 04/22/09 Posts: 15	Mon 05/18/09 06:19 PM
Lovely use of sensory imagery!

Gossipmpm Joined Tue 03/03/09 Posts: 19414	Mon 05/18/09 06:55 PM
To you

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Mon 05/18/09 08:31 PM
nicely done

Gossipmpm Joined Tue 03/03/09 Posts: 19414	Tue 05/19/09 03:47 AM
Thanks kc

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