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AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Tue 06/09/09 03:56 PM
~ ALWAYS ~ I close my eyes. I am falling, falling, into you, into me, into us. I open my heart to trust what I knew before our Love began. I land in familiar territory, a story known only to you and me, as something beyond extraordinary, as something beyond two married Souls. We are known to one another for all time, like fruit to the vine, like a sigh that can’t be denied its meaning, its feeling, its need for grieving, healing, or for revealing Truth. Nothing concealed. I touch what is real, and will always behold your Soul as my own. ~© JDS 06/09/2009~

SunnyMcleod Joined Fri 01/11/08 Posts: 15208	Tue 06/09/09 04:17 PM
That's beautiful hun

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Tue 06/09/09 05:57 PM
what a wonderful flow of words, your spirit revealed always We are known to one another for all time, like fruit to the vine, like a sigh that can’t be denied its meaning, its feeling, its need for grieving, healing, or for revealing Truth. Nothing concealed. I touch what is real, and will always behold your Soul as my own. loved this

crimsonphoenix Joined Wed 09/19/07 Posts: 276	Tue 06/09/09 06:03 PM
really beautiful, to me it seems about the passion and commitent of deep/profound love. i love how the words merge together.

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Tue 06/09/09 06:23 PM Edited by AngelLight on Tue 06/09/09 06:29 PM
That's beautiful hun Ty Sunny... Oh, btw, it's nice to meet you!

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Tue 06/09/09 06:24 PM
what a wonderful flow of words, your spirit revealed always We are known to one another for all time, like fruit to the vine, like a sigh that can’t be denied its meaning, its feeling, its need for grieving, healing, or for revealing Truth. Nothing concealed. I touch what is real, and will always behold your Soul as my own. loved this Ty (((p))) So glad you liked it.

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Tue 06/09/09 06:29 PM
really beautiful, to me it seems about the passion and commitent of deep/profound love. i love how the words merge together. crimson...I appreciate your thoughts/comments Ty for reading, and for the flowers.

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Tue 06/09/09 07:18 PM
hi sweet one,another beautiful write

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Tue 06/09/09 10:08 PM
hi sweet one,another beautiful write Thanks (((P)))....good to see you again

MzEm Joined Wed 03/25/09 Posts: 1558	Wed 06/10/09 05:48 AM
I love it! Wonderful write...

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Wed 06/10/09 07:41 AM
I love it! Wonderful write... Thank you Emmy. Good Morning. Glad you like the write

frankfk Joined Sun 09/24/06 Posts: 5684	Wed 06/10/09 07:49 AM
Soft and melting gradually ~ ALWAYS ~ I close my eyes. I am falling, falling, into you, into me, into us. I open my heart to trust what I knew before our Love began. I land in familiar territory, a story known only to you and me, as something beyond extraordinary, as something beyond two married Souls. We are known to one another for all time, like fruit to the vine, like a sigh that can’t be denied its meaning, its feeling, its need for grieving, healing, or for revealing Truth. Nothing concealed. I touch what is real, and will always behold your Soul as my own. ~© JDS 06/09/2009~

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Wed 06/10/09 08:35 AM
Soft and melting gradually ~ ALWAYS ~ I close my eyes. I am falling, falling, into you, into me, into us. I open my heart to trust what I knew before our Love began. I land in familiar territory, a story known only to you and me, as something beyond extraordinary, as something beyond two married Souls. We are known to one another for all time, like fruit to the vine, like a sigh that can’t be denied its meaning, its feeling, its need for grieving, healing, or for revealing Truth. Nothing concealed. I touch what is real, and will always behold your Soul as my own. ~© JDS 06/09/2009~ Ty for the lovely comment and flowers (((Frank)))....it's always good to see you

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Wed 06/10/09 10:58 AM
Yeyyyy!

d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Wed 06/10/09 12:06 PM
I can picture you some day in life when you get to be old enough to be a grandmother reading books to your grandchildren as they fall into a soft smiled sleep.

CitiGurl Joined Wed 04/22/09 Posts: 15	Wed 06/10/09 07:33 PM
You really write beautiful phrases that capture a whole story in a few words..."I land in familiar territory", "like fruit to the vine". Very nice writing - a pleasure to read.

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Thu 06/11/09 06:44 AM
Yeyyyy! Ty for reading DK.

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Thu 06/11/09 06:47 AM
I can picture you some day in life when you get to be old enough to be a grandmother reading books to your grandchildren as they fall into a soft smiled sleep. Hey Sweet (((J)))....it's been awhile. Good to see you and I hope you are well. Ty for the lovely imagery and compliment

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Thu 06/11/09 06:50 AM
You really write beautiful phrases that capture a whole story in a few words..."I land in familiar territory", "like fruit to the vine". Very nice writing - a pleasure to read. Thanks CitiGurl! I appreciate your input Hey, did you ever determine if you and ArtGurl are related?