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Lisa and Dali and Me
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Wow, nothing else to say but "Wow"
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As we await the Super Bowl
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Wonderfully said!
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Desire's Intimidating
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Nice one BK, I read it twice and it was just as powerful the second time around...
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Real
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Christmas Legend
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loving this DKW!
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Hesitation
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There is more than A slight hesitation Putting pen to paper I write with pain Fully behind me Straight laced tight Making it difficult To breathe This is different As the pen goes down Do I jinx that Which I wish to receive? A gold star for being Just me, two thumbs up That you actually see An excercise, so foreign To me Loving you as YOU love YOU---Good write... |
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Lyrically Hers
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Boy, I am a sucker for a great love story. ![]() I'm with you,a great love story unfolding right before our eyes. |
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??? ramble
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Great job Maleah!
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together we stand...
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Beautiful, I always enjoy a poem from you. Thank you for blessing us with this delightful prose.
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...Me...
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Nice one D!
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#1 Contender
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Loving the flow of this one BK, falling for one who's intent isn't to love you is rough...
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My Coordinate System
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Just as soon as I think I got you figured out you blow me away! Dang man this what I would call a rightous joint.....
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Cherishing an Angel
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Wonderfully expressed words of love. Great work K
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Draggin' My Dragons
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I love the picture you painted with your words--Nicely done DKW....
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Night
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Nice work..Welcome...
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*** poetry
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Blowing out the candle
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Nicely done!
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Collection of Poems
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Just read a few of your collected poems and although I liked them this one I really felt...Good write... ![]() ![]() ![]() Well I am happy to have proved you wrong LOL |
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Collection of Poems
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Just read a few of your collected poems and although I liked them this one I really felt...Good write...
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My Walk
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That sounds like a wonderful walk...
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