Topic: Night
douc0024's photo
Thu 11/12/09 12:18 PM
A thousand white fires
the stars did light
a great battle scene
depicted at night

Growing blue crystals
a hum in my eyes
glitter with prow
preparing for flight

Red, I'll paint you
Dance round in glow
white sparks of light
a fire made of snow

Hands of feathers
blistered in magic
traveled in bleak streets
to swallow up defeat

From me comes sight
a spool of ladies might
I'll sit spinning
my magic, on this night.

no photo
Thu 11/12/09 01:18 PM

A thousand white fires
the stars did light
a great battle scene
depicted at night

Growing blue crystals
a hum in my eyes
glitter with prow
preparing for flight

Red, I'll paint you
Dance round in glow
white sparks of light
a fire made of snow

Hands of feathers
blistered in magic
traveled in bleak streets
to swallow up defeat

From me comes sight
a spool of ladies might
I'll sit spinning
my magic, on this night.



:wink: crafty... crafty indeed.

Sharris's photo
Thu 11/12/09 02:35 PM
"a hum in my eyes "

I love how that feels, audible, inaudible, woven against the dark..beautiful

welcome

jimz's photo
Thu 11/12/09 05:24 PM
liked it, nice write!

Fusion99's photo
Thu 11/12/09 06:42 PM
Nice piece, please show more of your loom:wink:

Welcome to the site and the poetry forumhappy

no photo
Thu 11/12/09 06:50 PM
Casting spells, to drop in a well,
reading turns, to burning yearns,,,,,wink.
GREAT WRITE!!!!flowerforyou drinker

And Welcome aboard,,,,:wink:

douc0024's photo
Fri 11/13/09 01:13 AM
Thanks :)) Perhaps I shall indeed share more.

MzEm's photo
Fri 11/13/09 08:18 AM
Nice work..Welcome...

no photo
Fri 11/13/09 08:43 AM
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