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A slight hesitation Putting pen to paper I write with pain Fully behind me Straight laced tight Making it difficult To breathe This is different As the pen goes down Do I jinx that Which I wish to receive? A gold star for being Just me, two thumbs up That you actually see An excercise, so foreign To me |
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I "hestitated" in reading this, you always make people think too much, but ala's it's good for what little brain I have left.....ah etched pain, our souls are etch-a sketches and we always seemed to be doodlers.....nicely etched....don't hestitate so long to post another.
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"I write with pain
Fully behind me"   |
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There is more than A slight hesitation Putting pen to paper I write with pain Fully behind me Straight laced tight Making it difficult To breathe This is different As the pen goes down Do I jinx that Which I wish to receive? A gold star for being Just me, two thumbs up That you actually see An excercise, so foreign To me I always enjoy when you post, great write |
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Do I jinx that Which I wish to receive? I think this is great but this one part seemed awkward to me. Great write. I just wanted to let you know what I saw. Thank you for posting. You have unique style. |
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Do I jinx that Which I wish to receive? I think this is great but this one part seemed awkward to me. Great write. I just wanted to let you know what I saw. Thank you for posting. You have unique style. thanks for the critique. I wrote it on my lunch break. I actually don't even know if it's finished |
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nicely done...
i do wish you had more time write |
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nicely done... i do wish you had more time write K- I will make the time, soon, very soon. You know, I think in the past I've posted enough on here to fill a short book. I'm ready to get my writing groove back on. We have so many new members who probably assume I never write, which us old timers know is definately not the case.  Huck-I'm jealous of your always fluid and well thought out replies-I love reading your responses...not quite as much as your poems though  ArtGurl-You know it's just great to see you back-you were missed Jimz-you know I always like hearing from you 
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Sometimes, to slur, is to be. wink..
And to be, just is...... Opens ones inner reflections, to hear more.. I LiKE THAT!!!!!!!  
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Awesome!
it!
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Awesome! it! thanks dear Tanya T- always so supportive
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There is more than A slight hesitation Putting pen to paper I write with pain Fully behind me Straight laced tight Making it difficult To breathe This is different As the pen goes down Do I jinx that Which I wish to receive? A gold star for being Just me, two thumbs up That you actually see An excercise, so foreign To me Loving you as YOU love YOU---Good write... |
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Wow.
I read this again. I don't think I "got it" the first time. It's perfect. By far one of the best things I've read that you've written. Much love. |
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One should never hesitate to let the ink flow upon the paper to leave our thoughts behind........
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inthemeantime- nice to see you again
MzEm- thanks kindly, hope your studies are going well plastic- much love right back to you Kristi-you're right, writing can release many things |
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