Topic: #1 Contender
brwnkimba's photo
Sun 11/29/09 11:10 AM
Jimmied the lock on my heart and robbed me blind.
Now what’s mine is yours but what’s yours is not mine.
Her skin is so smooth, pure silk never felt this fine.
My touch must be confused as is my mind’s eye.

Ever been loved by one to the point of euphoria?
Then 2 weeks later the 1 you let in is ignoring ya.
I’m finally getting over the last of these pretenders.
Harlots guised as Queens, glass Joan’s robed as the #1 contender.

In her court I was only a jester,
never had a chance at being king.
Unlawfully sequestered & used for monetary support,
unknowingly just a fling.

You never expect to be played so perfectly by such a Love virtuoso.
She held on tightly strumming my chords throughout the 1st concerto grosso.

This girl architected my body as if the foundation had flaws.
She blew me down fast as though I was constructed with straw.
I knew better than to get entangled by the likes of her kind.
Hindsight is 20/20, in the beginning true clarity’s hard to find.

Subsequently my focus was centered solely on her shaker.
The best ever out the shop run by the Supreme Maker.
Had faith the visual was backed by intriguing conversation.
Broadcasted to the family this is much more than mere infatuation.

Sully my thoughts now in retrospect,
I was young at the time of this introspect.
More power to your heart as the beat continues.
Was the summer I was dumber than a fast-food menu.

We build as we grow and learn what we don't already know.
Keep the good knowledge for future use and let the faulty stuff go.
Hand is to glove as the right bait never fails.
Some pick heads while others always go with tails.:wink:

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Sun 11/29/09 11:21 AM
We have all succumbed to that spell at some point or another. Your retelling is most amusing... though I'm not sure it felt like it at the time.bigsmile

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Sun 11/29/09 03:53 PM
drinker Been there, done that, love the way you wrote it!
(((Brwn))) drinker flowerforyou

kc0003's photo
Sun 11/29/09 10:46 PM
drinks

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Sun 11/29/09 10:54 PM
This really amazed me.
Any more praise I could say than that would cheapen how great this piece of art is.

MzEm's photo
Mon 11/30/09 08:01 AM
Loving the flow of this one BK, falling for one who's intent isn't to love you is rough...

Good job!

HuckleberryFinn's photo
Mon 11/30/09 08:11 AM
loved the vocab and continuing thoughts in this, very nice....

brwnkimba's photo
Mon 11/30/09 04:59 PM
Edited by brwnkimba on Mon 11/30/09 05:00 PM
Time does heal Princess pkd1220 go right ahead & laugh guilt-freebigsmile thank you.

Yeah MsTeddyBear2u:laughing:hey kinda hard to find something new on this planet that hasn't been done up till sun up. Thanks Darlinflowerforyou


kc0003 you're the one falling out brah still drinkin, I'm the one that helps your drunk a$$ up:laughing: Right on!!

That name is DA SHIZNIT (plastic_pancakes)shades
Thank you very much Sir:thumbsup:

MzEmslaphead some time ago and a lesson learnedsmile2
Blessings my SisTah!!

Really appreciate the compliments HuckleberryFinn my friend!waving