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“It’s a Sad World”
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Simply wonderful! Beautiful....
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My Soldier
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I wait for you On satin sheets Perfectly posed Powdered and perfumed All doors open...... You enter My body quivers As you approach In your suit of armour The sweat of my feminity Beckons to you Please Enter my kingdom Fill me With the power of you Let me ride Your neverending sword And love me,,,,,,,, And love me........ Let us explode In victory Together The raven haired warrior And her soldier Left smoldering In the remnants Of their Fire Tammy Tammy, Girl, I think I need smoke after this... |
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Misguided Id-enty Mantra
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Very good write...
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Nice work!
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Scent of Your Cologne
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The scent of your cologne is still lingering on my shirt. I almost don't want to wash it. As I breath it in It makes me feel like you are here, and propels me to want to beg you to be here. I don't know when I will get to smell your cologne on your sweet skin. As the cologne fades from my reach So may you. Tanya 11-9-2009 One of my good friends and I were talking about how we used to love certain colognes on our long gone boyfriends lol Lagerfield, Cool Water, and Very Sexy For Men=Vicky's Secrets...Thanks for putting into words just what we were talking about.... I am glad that my write was helpful? Yeah I guess that's the word. Amd it made me smile....thanks.... |
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Topic:
Scent of Your Cologne
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The scent of your cologne is still lingering on my shirt. I almost don't want to wash it. As I breath it in It makes me feel like you are here, and propels me to want to beg you to be here. I don't know when I will get to smell your cologne on your sweet skin. As the cologne fades from my reach So may you. Tanya 11-9-2009 One of my good friends and I were talking about how we used to love certain colognes on our long gone boyfriends lol Lagerfield, Cool Water, and Very Sexy For Men=Vicky's Secrets...Thanks for putting into words just what we were talking about.... |
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Yester Youth
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You know I am diggin' this peice, you brought back some good memories!
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Both Barrels
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They need a finger snaping icon! "Snap snap snap! Very cool write...
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... I had a Dream ...
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JR, very nice, good to see you back...
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"Faint Kinda Echo"
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Wow man that was slick.
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Ramble Away
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Real nice of you to say HuckleberryFinn Princess pkd1220 you have always been so very thoughtful,as well I feel the MzEm you stood me up. I was at the rendevous spot that YOU picked! jk Awwww man, now how could a stand up a man such as yourseld? You sure you got the right date and time? |
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Jingle Diarrhea
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So so funny LOL
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Topic:
how do we Do this?
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You did how we do very well!
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Ramble Away
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Yes sirr, very nice BK...
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Good write Fusion! Man you are so deep....
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Topic:
Fool Me Once.....
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Boy who cried don't...
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Wow, very well done.
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Topic:
To The Moon! (re-write)
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Good one Ekko...
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Sin
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Very nice Jim...
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Topic:
I Should Learn To Write
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Simply wonderful...delightfully complex....beautifully written....Thank you for knowing how to write...
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