...Me...

Needs
a controling woman
who can mold me
into somthing
im not


...ME...


so that she
can get mad
at


...ME...


for not
being


...Me...


whenever
I sleeps


with
her as



...SHE...

loved it.

Nice one D!

yes, yes, yes

me, she, wtf happened to the people we used to be?
ughhhh!...its all a bit too much sometimes...

nicely done...

interesting concept, I've always felt that relationships got in trouble when one tried to mold the other...hmmm, whatever works....I can't be molded, the original has been broken...still though, this had a nice shape to it.

dude, i think you missed the meaning of this piece. dont just look at what the words say, look at what they imply and what the piece doesnt come right out and say...

qe32,

I appreciate your concern for my well being.

The slap in the face with the helping hand up.

Such a loyal quality to share with us.

Would you believe;

I am rich
I am poor

which do you believe?

Do you believe what I am saying is who I am?

Do actors play themselves in movies?

Do you judge all books by there covers?



You see.. I love to write. Love it.



I write for the love of writing. I have written all types of emotions in my poetry and will continue to share my best and worst feelings as I feel inspired to do so.

Let me help you better understand this write.

I am - a cool ashole.

I didnt sign up to be a super hero or a villian in life.

Every day I change my clothes from one to the other.
Depending on my moods.

I think they call it bipolar if you want to label me to
something I dont feel I am.

I call it -- being a human who doesnt live in denial.

I see alot of alcholics who act happy in life.
I see alot of churchgoers who seem sad walking into church.

Me, is who I am as a person. ME, is the person who does something someone else asks him to do for them. This is a natural aspect of life.

We all change when we are around different people. Never always the same.

Never happiest when we are doing what someone else wants us to do as opposed to what we would like to do.

What can I do to be a guy just like you looking for a woman on an internet site? Man are we confident!

Look in the mirror. From eye to eye to eye to eye.

Where is your plank?

or was that the best reply you could come up with
to try and help someone in life?

Well let me help you better understand what I am saying as I will break this down for you.



...Me... (is me as an independent man)

Needs
a controling woman
who can mold me
into somthing
im not


...ME... (this is the guy who does everything his woman asks him to do when she says it)


so that she (she is who she is)
can get mad (turns into SHE)
at


...ME... (the man SHE wants me to be)


for not
being


...Me... (The man I am)

whenever
I sleeps


with
her as



...SHE... (the woman she is not or does not want to be)

It's kind of an ironic joke on relationships and how we lose a part of who we are when we are commiting to someone else.


Moral of the poem. A relationship should be a compromise based on love and respect for one another. We should do things we might not want to do for others knowing that they would do the same for us when they love us. Love isnt always about what makes us feel good. Sometimes its about what we can do to make others feel good. This is the glue to all healthy relationships. Neither one should only give give give or take take take. There has to be a balance of both give and take to keep a relationship strong between two people.

I know, I have been both.

The give, give, giver.

And the take, take, taker.

Rich and Poor.

((((((d4tc))))))

You always bring a smile to my face,and if you look in my eye's,they are always shining.Wish you could see them..I look forward to your thoughts,you always so kindly share.
Thank you.
Sherrie.