Topic: The Weight of the World | |
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The Weight of the World
I live with the fear of not being able to stand the weight of the world on my shoulders as I try to become a man My back is against the wall I lean back not to hold it up but to brace myself so that I won’t fall I made the choice of creating a family husband and father their lives not mine is the depth of responsibility Nervous hands toil to earn enough to give them what I yearn sweat across my brow work never seems to cease so I never rest they will always have the best of me And in these dark hours I never wonder where my strength comes from as she leans against the wall with me so that we can carry on |
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nice
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Mig~fantastic as always..
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Nice write....
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Wow... that ending really stitched all together... for me.
Wonderful write!! |
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Beautiful..........
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A little music with your poem......
Stevie Wonder: You and I http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zOW2UfvWWAE&feature=related |
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We are not alone. You shared a very personal part of your heart with us. Thank you.
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Against all odds, all this dispare, we shall go forward.
On to richer lives, for we stand as a family, never to coward. For all that they own, all that they lust, WE shall prevail. For its of Love for each other, I call you my Brother. Someday, will be as one,,and all those who stole, shall be in jail. Your write tugs at the heart,,and embraces good will...Love keeps us all joined and combined,,when we know we grow through our living. |
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mig25 I enjoyed the poem. Great work. I'm a little envious of you though. I long for that kind of relationship. You are one lucky guy.
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I really loved reading this one. Its a beautiful write.
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Hmnnnn nice one..,
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mig, beautiful!!! and you know, she leans against the wall knowing where hers comes from too!! love this!!
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What a lucky man you are! Thanks for sharing....
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Thank you all for the kind words
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nice!
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