Topic: The Weight of the World
mig25's photo
Fri 07/29/11 02:37 AM
The Weight of the World


I live with the fear
of not being able to stand
the weight of the world
on my shoulders
as I try to become a man

My back
is against the wall
I lean back
not to hold it up
but to brace myself so that I won’t fall

I made the choice
of creating a family
husband and father
their lives
not mine
is the depth of responsibility

Nervous hands
toil to earn
enough to give them
what I yearn
sweat across my brow
work never seems to cease
so I never rest
they will always have
the best of me

And in these dark hours
I never wonder
where my strength comes from
as she leans against the wall
with me
so that we can carry on



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Fri 07/29/11 06:10 AM
nice

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Fri 07/29/11 10:23 AM
Mig~fantastic as always..

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Fri 07/29/11 10:42 AM
Nice write....smokin

Teditis's photo
Fri 07/29/11 11:04 AM
Wow... that ending really stitched all together... for me.
Wonderful write!!drinker

TxsGal3333's photo
Fri 07/29/11 12:10 PM
Beautiful..........

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Fri 07/29/11 01:04 PM
A little music with your poem......smokin

Stevie Wonder: You and I
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zOW2UfvWWAE&feature=related

Sharris's photo
Fri 07/29/11 01:32 PM
We are not alone. You shared a very personal part of your heart with us. Thank you.

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Fri 07/29/11 08:30 PM
Against all odds, all this dispare, we shall go forward.
On to richer lives, for we stand as a family, never to coward.
For all that they own, all that they lust, WE shall prevail.
For its of Love for each other, I call you my Brother.
Someday, will be as one,,and all those who stole, shall be in jail.



Your write tugs at the heart,,and embraces good will...Love keeps us all joined and combined,,when we know we grow through our living.

Midnight_Hawk's photo
Sat 07/30/11 03:41 PM
mig25 I enjoyed the poem. Great work. I'm a little envious of you though. I long for that kind of relationship. You are one lucky guy.:smile:

RainbowTrout's photo
Sat 07/30/11 03:49 PM
I really loved reading this one. Its a beautiful write.:smile:

ajagirl's photo
Sat 07/30/11 04:12 PM
Hmnnnn nice one..,:smile:

bastet126's photo
Sat 07/30/11 04:15 PM
mig, beautiful!!! and you know, she leans against the wall knowing where hers comes from too!! love this!! flowerforyou

laura329's photo
Sat 07/30/11 06:37 PM
What a lucky man you are! Thanks for sharing....:heart:

mig25's photo
Sun 07/31/11 12:46 AM
Thank you all for the kind words

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Mon 08/01/11 07:48 AM
nice!