Topic:
You Close My Eyes
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I have been reading your words since early 2012. Never do you fail to reach some part of me. I wish you wrote more..... That's probably the best compliment I've ever received . . . thank you |
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Topic:
You Close My Eyes
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That's beautiful! Why thank you very much!! |
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Once again you've created a work of art. Nice one.
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Topic:
I Was Here
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I Was Here
There before the sun I stand silhouetted against the ocean's shore as if my journey was imprinted in the sand by the creator of life and my prints are there for the world to know I was here |
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Topic:
You Close My Eyes
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You Close My Eyes
You touch me slowly as if you are on a journey to discover my soul and I close my eyes and await Shivering as the gentle easiness of your fingertips recite each wish of each star that interrupts the fading sun's light and I feel each star's reflection within you I want to dream I live this moment tonight tomorrow and forever so that when you close my eyes and take my breath away my heart will forever beat to your love's rhythm |
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Topic:
Each Step You Take
Edited by
mig25
on
Thu 08/27/15 04:55 PM
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Each Step You Take
Thoughts running in and out of my soul as I watch you walk away "��Don't go" stand at the edge of my throat but never fall from my lips and I am alone again I can feel each step you take it's as if you'��re walking through me running to escape to leave My knees grow weaker my body cold as I watch love hurt as I watch life abandon me I am alone again |
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Topic:
Help
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Help
I can feel time's grasp growing weaker and weaker as if its hands cannot hold my journey another moment I rush through memories trying to find the one I want to take with me but there are so many Desperately I reach out and try to grab a hold of the time yet there is nothing to hold onto my efforts are as futile as anyone who feels they have the power to own that which is not theirs to claim I inhale deeply as if this monumental breath would stave off the inevitable whispering a prayer begging and pleading for help wanting needing the strength to hold on to make this moment last longer but the hands of time are weary and they eventually let go of me . . . and I exhale |
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Topic:
Words and Music
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Words and Music
I don't want to feel the rain the wind or cold because I already feel your words And the blues are playing as I try hope and wish that your words and the music were not one and the same |
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Topic:
The Beautiful Interruption
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The Beautiful Interruption
Sitting just at the water's edge watching time slowly undress the night revealing morning’s light It seems to rise from earth's soul stretching as far as forever as its warmth slowly interrupts the chill that lingered from last night I look over to you and you had that smile the one that takes my breath away every morning afternoon and evening Not sure what our plans are as the day is just beginning but well the night really doesn't have to end |
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Topic:
Tormented Solitude
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Ahhh it fees good to finally have time to write again. How is everyone doing?
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Topic:
Tormented Solitude
Edited by
mig25
on
Tue 07/07/15 05:35 PM
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Tormented Solitude
The emptiness within my soul lingers as if it were a shadow in need of light and I shiver from the imperfect chill of the gray sky's bitterness alone In this tormented solitude I scream to the deaf ears that have left me yearning I plead to the hands that once touched me hoping and in a whispered silence beg your absence to please just try one more time Memories try to understand why as my heart mimics the uneven lines of clouded darkness forming above me I close my eyes . . . the anticipation of rain I want to feel it'��s sadness wash over me to grasp each drop that falls so that I can remember what it feels like to have something to hold onto if only for an achingly brief moment |
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Topic:
MYSTERY
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I've been away for a little while but as soon as I come back I find another magnificent piece . . . as usual I truly love your work
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My new book sold 30 copies in just two hours...wow I was wonder struck at my talent as a descriptive writer and now author. The Man from Chaunigan Lake....34 short stories of my life in a pristine wilderness location on the Chilcotin Plateau where wild horses still roam today! Congratulations!!! |
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Topic:
I Felt Them Rise
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I Felt Them Rise
I felt them rise from the depths of my now hollowed heart burning with pain and anger rising and then falling one drop by one drop until they were a raging free flowing river of why I felt them rise tormenting me as they journeyed from my thoughts to my anguish leaving my soul as dark as the night without a star helpless lost and without hope empty I felt the tears rise from deep within my chest rising until they found the confusion in my eyes and from there they fell sadly painfully one drop after one drop as the part of me that was you faded as quietly as the day ended |
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Topic:
Different
Edited by
mig25
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Sun 04/12/15 05:46 PM
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Different
I could hear the echoes as I stared intensely at the figure crying tortured tears Hands shaking trying to recreate the an alternate existence so that the words would no longer feel as cutting as the pain they've caused Yet the echoes continue as if they were designed to humiliate to torment an already imperfect soul There are choices that can hide the disfigurement of self-loathing caused by friendly strangers darkness forever loneliness or a knife that would tell my story and end their laughter I know I am different I hear their words every day and every night as if they accompany me throughout my life'��s travels they are the reason I stare intensely at the figure in the mirror wondering if they know just how much hurt they've caused |
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Topic:
Is love enough
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Is love enough when the weight of it forces you to your knees? Heaven hears my prayers, but answers with a quiet stillness, that shivers down my spine Not finished Well hurry up and finish!!!! You have me waiting and you know that's the hardest part of life |
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Topic:
roses
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Beautiful write
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Tommy
You know I truly love your work. Thanks for the constant inspiration. |
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Topic:
Angry
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Angry
I am the bastard you left alone crying wondering if by chance I did something to deserve your absence I lived each new day with the same fear that I will never be good enough to be your offspring you see I admired you even without ever knowing you because I needed to believe that somehow I was no different from anyone else I am the bastard you left alone hurt confused growing into an angry adult lost in a world of never knowing what it meant to have a father who loves me |
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Topic:
The Water's Fall
Edited by
mig25
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Sun 04/05/15 01:18 PM
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The Water’s Fall
Lungs shivering searching for that elusive breath between the tears years and the unfortunate remains of what we have left I still want to remember that beautiful place once called home and the broken promises of never being alone the sacrifices even as the breaths slowly began to fade gasping fighting trying to hold onto the family we made But the nothingness of so many of the same today's turned our yesterdays into a tomorrow that was desperately too far away I'��m drowning in this madness this sadness dark notes playing out a melody of the worst kind of emptiness I always believed you would take my breath away I just never thought it would be this way I know I waited too long swimming upstream through the circumstances trying to hold on to what I thought mattered never realizing my soul was battered but as I stand in the rain wondering about it all trying to capture that elusive breath when the reality of my life is that I'��m living the water's fall |
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