Hidden

I know
your worries
I understand your fears
the hopes of possible tomorrows
and the hurt of yesterday's promises
but now
tonight . . . for this one moment
may I
ask you
to let me discover
what makes you shiver
when you quietly scream
may I
touch
your desires
as if I were an artist
and you
were my instrument
and together
our music
was as sweet as jazz
under the star painted midnight

I won't
whisper
empty words
for there are no lyrics to this song
only
deep breaths
from the gentle strokes
that serve as the reasons for our life forever
so please
exhale
and let go
as I
slowly
erase your doubts
until
your heart feels mine
and our beating rhythm
becomes the improvisation
of two souls
undressing dreams
and finding
treasures
hidden
within inhibitions

Killing me softly with his words.
Beautifuly erotic, beautific in love and caring.
One of your best

Wow this made tears fall down my face
Very touching.

Ladywind7

Killing me softly with his words.
Beautifuly erotic, beautific in love and caring.
One of your best

Thank you so much . . . I'm going to try and start writing again. Hopefully I can continue to get better.

Annierooroo

Wow this made tears fall down my face
Very touching.

That is so deep. I never dreamed I could write something that could affect someone in that way. My ego thanks you . . . seriously thanks you.

Wonderful flow. Thanks for sharing.

There are no words to be said.
Beautiful doesn't say enough

you are welcome.

This is incredibly beautiful. Who ever she is she is a lucky lady.
Thanks for sharing