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Edited by
mig25
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Thu 08/27/15 04:55 PM
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Each Step You Take
Thoughts running in and out of my soul as I watch you walk away "��Don't go" stand at the edge of my throat but never fall from my lips and I am alone again I can feel each step you take it's as if you'��re walking through me running to escape to leave My knees grow weaker my body cold as I watch love hurt as I watch life abandon me I am alone again |
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Good job :)
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Great poem..
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Good construction. Easy flow. Readable. Nice!
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