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I Cry
I stand as close as possible to yesterday knowing it was then that I felt alive hoping it will comfort me now through the grieving wind's chill It is my thoughts that drag me through the pain time and again and yet it is those very same thoughts that fill my soul I wrap my arms around myself wanting to believe that though you're not here my hands could never be as empty as time's churning hands Maybe this is why I'm foolishly dreaming that you never left yet you did and I am here alone and that is why I cry |
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Very nice.
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Sweet.
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Bittersweet.
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Heartfelt
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Wow. Love this
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deeply heartfelt
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Thank you for the compliments . . . now I have a big head.
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Little depressing. I you should play with hope at the end. I like it anyway
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Little depressing. I you should play with hope at the end. I like it anyway I thought about making this more about hope but in the end, sometimes we do cry. And sometimes crying heals. But thank you. |
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Loved this the second time reading it just as much as the first.
Exactly the way it is. |
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