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The Dirty Dozen.
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Thank You,
2km Gossip Her OMG Face licking our sweat so sweet a treat as i eat you out after i took you to places we as us never did together you crumble in my hands like old puddy i pick you up and call you slutty naturally you slap me No No No the word 'wedding' traps me keywords: good sex captures me WHOOSHes me in like super mans cape a videod sensation taped the look of our face far from blank aftergasms speechless with no words to think |
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This gave me a dry throat. I felt short of breathe with anticipation wanting to know what happened and i still feel like i have no idea.
What i do know is this was one intense write! Awesome job on this one kc ![]() |
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THE WOMAN WITHIN !!
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Going Crazy
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great write!
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Complete..
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for What it is Worth
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When you can stop caring about yourself and start caring about others life just feels worth living puting ourselves first is life but does it makes us feel worthwhile i have to sit back and smile thank god for my time on trial go on about living a life i was given and doing what i do that makes me, me loving lurking hurting yearning wit widdling poetry |
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Dreams of Pleasure
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Of all of your poems, I think this one is my favorite so far.
I have read it a few times. ![]() |
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_-=Mirror_Mirror=-_
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Deeply rich in context. Very much enjoyed
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The housewife dance!
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It happened today. Haha ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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Invisible to all but d4tc
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Send me a link, I wanna hear!
![]() I write alot of poetry. some i read obsessively. some more. this was more. i really liked this one and you just enhanced it to a whole nother level i can appreciate. i feel honored. im getting mushy, lol, thats all i have to say, thanks again! ![]() |
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There is no Hero in Heroin
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I have never ever picked up a needle never ever will try that that kills them thems that tend to pretend doctors, can keep them I need something more to feel then a prick, pricking me with some plastic tube I need sex as raw as it is like a man hungry for a kid a thumbs up needing a lift just a hug would do me good something to tempt my would if you will i still feel real raw hunger pains forming before and after horny corn on the cobb corny hot tub warming bubbles and endorphines sponge your back relaxing do i make you tense in su- spense or do i drench your thirst first i take you behind the barn only it is not a barn it is the top of my car and we are both neck head neck heads bobbling kissing behind a fence with planes taking off above head as if this was a movie moving you for real I sex you up as the director and this is your odd-dition or as most would call it our first date |
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Invisible to all but d4tc
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![]() Listening again! ![]() ![]() has ever done for me! Thank You Very Much Abra! Love the laugh at the end... Most Awesome! ![]() You made my poem better than it was ![]() ![]() |
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This might leave a bruise
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I am sorry i am me. I know i can be better than this. I don't know what i am doing. I find happiness in mysery and I hate mysery. You don't know what that means. I smoke weed. i get high. Every day. I never told you that because I felt you would think less of me. I am at a point in my life where it is what i have always done. Comfortably. Everyone in my family does it so if you knew that you would have no reason to look at me as just another white sheep if confused. I don't drink much because my jaw becomes unglued. I think it irritates my arthritus. Not saying what I wouldn't only more so infused. Most times my eyes win when I lose. If I drink my jaw tingles with a real pain its screws. Unscrews. Rescrews. The mouth wants to mute the alcohol. I won't let it. I am skydiving into a sess pool. Forge it forgetten forget it forgotten. Soaring whilst I drown. |
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She sits watching
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best sex
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sex is the best when you are with the one you love want and need all in the same as always you need them as they need you sex is no less when you have this target to hit with the right Miss and she looks at you as no other Sir captures her her eyes saw your eyes licking lips tasting her from afar to close sex is no less you wink your way in aim in at her and say "i love" she says "you" see the same as I see with you sex is the best |
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You Can Always Have Another
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Invisible to all but Us
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Why is it when we do something bad We don't want anyone to know Covering our tracks Hiding the fact we must lie to make those who would not understand happy as guilty as it sounds we make ourselves appear in a sense innocent i am guilty of this I am sure you don't know my closet my bones skeletons I hide I am ashamed of what I love at times and this could kill someone as emotional as myself or you for that matter tippy toes patter glass hearts shatter pissing glass shards wishing so hard no one would find out whom exactly we are |
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spacious seems roomy
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I, um, oh WOW, holy maw batman, I leave these words stuck in my craw! ![]() thank you for the comments, dfk ![]() earthy - always! ![]() ![]() FaithfulOne ![]() I feel... Good ![]() |
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spacious seems roomy
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Don't do this to me Put me on the spot like this You know you want to tell them But do they need to know Do they need to know Do they want to know Do they care to know EVERY THING Can you not save SOME THINGS or will you create more tension suspenseded orbiting constantly wondering why? we! our? hear! why are we reading this wondering is this guy mad or is he happy and all i have to say is both God made me this way a man of mixed emotions moving I am just pissed off I can't live forever |
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