Topic: a female hand
d4tc's photo
Sat 10/17/09 06:08 PM
give me your hand

let me feel a life again

take this heart
out of this body of tin

PRY HERE
to prior knowledge
impress me

can open this head

dont let me be

d

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he one way
falls down
rabbit holes
holding on by
bare claws

a darker side
of the moon
in awws

he jaws

i am out of luck
scared to rest

done
guaging this test
hating my zest

rehating rehearsing
pain that these
words bring

i dont apologize

Im saving that
for the nice guys

shifty insecure eyes

those who wallow around
clipt
strung out by neckties

what a stiff life
for a rich guy
who lacks fun
all unsuprised

makes me glad
those are no longer
these eyes

I sigh

a life

goodnight d4

re:see you to sorrow

outplayed

underscored

nvkikigirl's photo
Sat 10/17/09 08:25 PM
wow! amazing writing!drinker

mig25's photo
Sat 10/17/09 08:32 PM
truly amazing!

no photo
Sat 10/17/09 09:00 PM
Definitely amazing...

ArtGurl's photo
Sun 10/18/09 11:47 AM



Brilliant!!!

MzEm's photo
Mon 10/19/09 12:48 PM
So cool...Great write D...

no photo
Mon 10/19/09 07:07 PM
A touch of her dew upon my thorned heart. Make me melt into day. great write bro!