Topic: she wept
jimz's photo
Mon 12/14/09 02:56 PM
Edited by jimz on Mon 12/14/09 03:25 PM
she fought the cupboards
dishes gave her war

and when he
came home drunk
with his open hand
he slapped her around

she fought the sheets
she banged herself
on the porcelin

and when he
came back again
she had just wiped
the blood from before

scared
she wept

as the fist
hit her
again
and
again
:cry:




pkh's photo
Mon 12/14/09 02:58 PM
:cry: :cry: flowerforyou

no photo
Mon 12/14/09 04:36 PM

she fought the cupboards
dishes gave her war

and when he
came home drunk
with his open hand
he slapped her around

she fought the sheets
she banged herself
on the porcelin

and when he
came back again
she had just wiped
the blood from before


Loved this.

no photo
Mon 12/14/09 06:11 PM
emotion felt-thru and thrutears

Sharris's photo
Mon 12/14/09 08:13 PM
I cannot find the words
felt intensely

MzEm's photo
Tue 12/15/09 08:02 AM
sad2 sad2

no photo
Tue 12/15/09 02:28 PM
..to think some live this every day...Fab write Jim..

d4tc's photo
Tue 12/15/09 04:29 PM
excellent write glasses

s1owhand's photo
Tue 12/15/09 04:37 PM
smokin

jimz's photo
Tue 12/15/09 04:40 PM
thank you my friends
jimmy