I can write everything
Slights, feelings, truths, lies
Words said in hate, in haste
I try to relate me- as I see
What has happened to us
A hurricane of pain
I strain to show you,
Lead you, to a better we.

Pleas fail, you express
Nothing but contempt
A disdain of the very essence
Of me, how I came to be
Cloaked in a veil
Pulling the wool over
My own eyes, surprising
No one who saw you
As the flawed boy, toying
With the the emotions
Of a scared little girl
Trapped in a woman's body
Having seen far too much
Up to this point in life.

Curled up in a ball
A kaleidoscope of emotion
Shattering in a thousand
Pieces, I reach out
Only to be met by
Cutting words and then
Silence, left to
Create the sad ending
As the credits roll
And I see my name
Alone-taking credit
For the sad story told.

Brilliant.

Very good and heartfelt.......

Fantastic

SAD BUT GOOD , THE PAINFUL SIDE OF LIFE..............

That was incredible. I wish I could write like that.

Thanks so much to all of you for the comments...I appreciate you taking time to write

pkd....
really 'felt' the telling in this..
teasingbrunette

thanks, I "felt" it when writing...

" Curled up in a ball, A kaleidoscope of emotion "


Yep, I'm feeling that with ya

I have come to believe that I am not alone, other people with hearts do exist.

Fetal position, while you carve and slice for no-reason.
This love you gave and spoke, now turned into branded hot pokes.

It is a heart felt write, and sadly lived to know its right.

I wish you weren't darlin

nice P really nice...

i added to your poem


you had said many stories where lies
show no strain as feeling frail. in so many ways
as a hurricane comes through not of pain
but of yelling up a storm
for being silent with no word to come
doesnt express of being such a idiot
that words could had been said
but no communication and pain on my end
for your the one that needs to pick up the shattered end
i sitting on my bed curled up reading a good book, no stress im fine
my emotions arent shot. as he may had tried to get me that way. but im fine, im adult not a child at that

Now it's just a matter of finding them. I think there are several on this forum.

You are a beautiful writer and I want to thank you for your gift.
Those who get to read your writings are very blessed.



SashaLynn

Very Cool Write

...now you're making me blush-thanks

I appreciate all who commented.