Community > Posts By > Fadedspirit
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Written in Chalk
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Great write. I thought you captured very well.
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For The Love of You
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Aww, thanks LAMom and pkh.
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diamonds
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Nice write.
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Silent Dreams
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Aww, thanks Mystique....she's biased anyway...lol
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For The Love of You
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Awww, thanks Mystique, now I'm smiling....lol
Thanks iam4u, I'm glad you enjoyed it my friend. Thanks Ainjel, I'm glad you liked it. |
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Love Like That
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Wow, an excellent write and a treat for the eyes as well as the heart my friend.
Cut from the pages of life perhaps? |
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Yesteryear
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Yes, very nice. Nice portrayal of progression mixed with faint pieces of regret.
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Silent Dreams
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Thanks Queene123, I'm glad you liked it. :)
Thanks kc. always the thoughts of what dreams may come. |
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For The Love of You
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For The Love of You
Confusion runs rampant While anger's amiss Hate comes unbound As lies leave in a hiss, Unpackaged undamaged Cleaning them out For this baggage Is too much to bear, Bottles of tears Saved through the years Broken on stones Of what I once feared Now all is left to the past. A death I must serve Unfailing unswerved As I put all of this baggage Behind. Once uncouth and so cold Yet now I'm willing and bold To follow you through This rough life, Only the rose that you gave with a sigh Opened a present With deep love inside Would destroy this monster in me, It's you I will serve And show all of my nerve For you gave me the gift That won't die. When your around My spirit's unbound And I am held safely in you, Loving and showing Compassionately glowing Forever I'm loved within you. Fadedspirit 1/25/2009 |
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Silent Dreams
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Silent Dreams
Listen to the birds And marvel to their song Take my hand and dance Don't think of what is wrong Cast your weary eyes upon me As I share with you my joy Sway with me in rhythm For I'm just another boy Let your spirit free it's binds As you feel the gentle breeze Hold me close and tell me What your dreams may be There's a magic glow about you Something most have never seen You sway just like an angel So very light upon your feet Lay with me upon the meadow And gaze upon the sky See what dreams may come your way As the silent clouds drift by Take this time to share your heart Don't let this moment pass you by For dreams can all come true If you dare to truely try. Fadedspirit 1/25/2009 |
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Sexual Heat
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Wow...that was err....verrry nice. I just had to write an answer to that one...hee hee hope y like it. Excellent write.
Rising steam within you My mind reeling from the past Tantalizing visions Of your touches make me gasp Melting from within Your eyes speak unto this heart A puddle I am forming Is this how once it made a start? Days I've held in dream And ohhh...those firey nights Never left this mind They just felt so right. Releasing all that tension You held tighly in my arms Longing for that heaven Where we are safe from harm. Cuddled moans escaping Our breath smokes of our desire A sensual sin unforgotten By passion's great big fire. fadedspirit 1/25/2009 |
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SMOOCHED!!! - part 2
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Better late than never I guess, but here I am. Them smooches are starting to crumble me....lol. Thanks TxsGal3333 and DKW.
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*********
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Another great write my friend. Like a breath of fresh air.
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Humble As...
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Very nice.
You've got a strong heart and it shows well bro. |
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Reaching Within
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1000111010123, thanks. Sometimes it only takes the care of a friend to lift another's spirits.
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Only make believe
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Very nice.
A heart and life are never as empty as they seem at the time. |
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The Roads We Travel
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Thanks MIrrorMirror, glad ya liked it.
Thanks beauty314. Thanks 1000111010123. |
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Reaching Within
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Reaching Within
I see your heart weary With growing unrest Tear stricken eyes With a faint pulse From your chest. The trembles have caught you And bundled your nerves, Your pain growing deeply Along with your hurt. Wounded and seething, Revenge sounds so nice, What have you to gain But feeding your strife? Close your eyes now And heal your unrest, Let your tears wash away Your darkened request. Quicken your call To the nature of light, Finding those memories Where things seemed so right. Nothing cures pain They say cept for time, And only then Does it ever subside. Find strength in your friendships As care will unfold Don't hide from the darkness As you have been told. Find knowlege through peace While your hurts tend to wane, Lay gentle in rest, Don't give to a blame. Wise is the person Finding the strength to forgive And strong is the person Whom finds their passion to live. Fadedspirit 1/17/2009 |
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The Roads We Travel
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The Roads We Travel
Together we share A common bond, Friends and spirits Where hearts will mend. A place where only The hearts have found A comforting silence As knowledge begins. Within this circle While we commune Our light grows stronger As we are imbued BY strength. The chords of time Shall never erase This circle of hearts Caught up In care's embrace. Never shall time Steal our light For what we bring Lives within us inside. Our collective has grown As our diversity shows Hearts, minds and souls Together Can withstand the tests Of trials and time. The circle of hearts Which friendships bear Bid to each Come and share. Give to we your burdens deep and lighten your load For in our strength dwells a light. Shed your tears of pains and woe We've been to many far places Yet we were never alone. Look now upon the road my friend You're never alone For the footprints don't end. Always keep a special smile in place For those in a circle of hearts Will always finish their race. Fadedspirit 1/18/2009 |
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Grandma
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Grandma
A shadow cast of angel Yet made human by her tears She is strong and loving Yet the human wears her fears. In her eyes is shown a measure Of what life for her should be, In her heart there is a treasure... Most won't ever see. Most times she treads in silence While guarding her deep cares. Confused and deeply searching, That's why she often stares. Her aura seems to glow When she finds a happy face Yet illusions seem so real When she finds that special place. To those who see her truly, Her age just seems to fade, Transformed into an angel That waits to fly away. Though her mind is like a child She sings just like a bird Sometimes she's awfully funny And sometimes she's never heard. So many close don't know her And some refuse to see She's preparing for a trip Somwhere where she'll be free. Behind those staring eyes Way past the hurts and woes, Take comfort that she's forgiven you Though you think she just don't know. She might have many names Though she might not have a clue It's all a part of growing up And going somewhere new. Fadedspirit 1/9/2009 |
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