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Silence whispers words unheard
memories of life up-turned soul desires remain untouched is paradise alive as such? Sun depletes a liquid dew heart and soul remains subdued utterings of love distorts could they be of shattered thoughts? Reminiscing days of old shivers up a spine gone cold for now that I am old and weary the truth of life, remains a query.. |
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Silence whispers words unheard memories of life up-turned soul desires remain untouched is paradise alive as such? Sun depletes a liquid dew heart and soul remains subdued utterings of love distorts could they be of shattered thoughts? Reminiscing days of old shivers up a spine gone cold for now that I am old and weary the truth of life, remains a query.. nice |
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Yes, very nice. Nice portrayal of progression mixed with faint pieces of regret.
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Thankyou..
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well done
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Life is full and short lived. A heart is opened until it stops. And a word is written for every tear that falls. In the end WE never feel we had enough time to be here. But I am glad I lived long enough to had the time to read your poem. THANK YOU..and GOOD JOB.. |
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