Topic: Yesteryear
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Sat 01/24/09 06:12 PM
Silence whispers words unheard
memories of life up-turned
soul desires remain untouched
is paradise alive as such?

Sun depletes a liquid dew
heart and soul remains subdued
utterings of love distorts
could they be of shattered thoughts?

Reminiscing days of old
shivers up a spine gone cold
for now that I am old and weary
the truth of life, remains a query..




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Sat 01/24/09 06:17 PM

Silence whispers words unheard
memories of life up-turned
soul desires remain untouched
is paradise alive as such?

Sun depletes a liquid dew
heart and soul remains subdued
utterings of love distorts
could they be of shattered thoughts?

Reminiscing days of old
shivers up a spine gone cold
for now that I am old and weary
the truth of life, remains a query..







flowerforyou nicebigsmile

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Sun 01/25/09 04:48 PM
Yes, very nice. Nice portrayal of progression mixed with faint pieces of regret. flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

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Sun 01/25/09 06:23 PM
Thankyou..

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Sun 01/25/09 07:16 PM
well done


flowerforyou

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Sun 01/25/09 07:26 PM
:heart: drinker :heart: flowerforyou drinker

Life is full and short lived.

A heart is opened until it stops.

And a word is written for every tear that falls.

In the end WE never feel we had enough time to be here.

But I am glad I lived long enough to had the time to read your poem. THANK YOU..and GOOD JOB..:heart: