Topic: Humble As...
brwnkimba's photo
Tue 01/13/09 06:22 PM


I go and wish for the best love you can accept willfully with trust & passion.
Is that too much for 1 so lovely, what man can offer this flawless wish granted?
Who holds the key to unlock your door for Heaven on this Earth?
Free and fresh as a child’s first blessed breathe on New Years day at birth.
Never alone, with the belief that all will enrapture and acknowledge her invaluable worth.
Need you my Queen for 1 thing, it’s all but a command as I will happily search.
Want for not, never made to wait, discover the last true gentleman who’ll insure your good fate.
Her tactics are larcenist at capturing heart favors with ease.
Make the fear of feeling emotions well hidden ascend relieving as summer breeze.
The oceans still with every wave stunned at her visage.
Her routine is daily assertion of positivity giving the underdog all the applause.
She’s true monarchy from the soul with royal taste in place.
It’s how innocence portrayed guilty pleasures and won the worlds embrace.
To bring balance is a Libran skill and something needed by all.
Without this tool in your life box you may walk but find it much easier to fall.
I’ll be the gesture of affection vested solely in her protection expecting little or no return.
Well tuned this enchanted instrument that swoons at the mention of her with sweet sentiment, as deep within the fire burns.
This woman leaves me humble as she teaches me what I so desperately need to exist.
Wrought with loves crafty guidance and kissed by her rose colored faultless lips.

LAMom's photo
Tue 01/13/09 07:24 PM



I go and wish for the best love you can accept willfully with trust & passion.
Is that too much for 1 so lovely, what man can offer this flawless wish granted?
Who holds the key to unlock your door for Heaven on this Earth?
Free and fresh as a child’s first blessed breathe on New Years day at birth.
Never alone, with the belief that all will enrapture and acknowledge her invaluable worth.
Need you my Queen for 1 thing, it’s all but a command as I will happily search.
Want for not, never made to wait, discover the last true gentleman who’ll insure your good fate.
Her tactics are larcenist at capturing heart favors with ease.
Make the fear of feeling emotions well hidden ascend relieving as summer breeze.
The oceans still with every wave stunned at her visage.
Her routine is daily assertion of positivity giving the underdog all the applause.
She’s true monarchy from the soul with royal taste in place.
It’s how innocence portrayed guilty pleasures and won the worlds embrace.
To bring balance is a Libran skill and something needed by all.
Without this tool in your life box you may walk but find it much easier to fall.
I’ll be the gesture of affection vested solely in her protection expecting little or no return.
Well tuned this enchanted instrument that swoons at the mention of her with sweet sentiment, as deep within the fire burns.
This woman leaves me humble as she teaches me what I so desperately need to exist.
Wrought with loves crafty guidance and kissed by her rose colored faultless lips.



Again your footprints Humble us all

:heart:

pkh's photo
Wed 01/14/09 05:09 AM
wonderful

no photo
Wed 01/14/09 07:18 AM
Bravoflowers flowers flowers flowers flowers flowers flowers flowers flowers flowers

Mystique42's photo
Wed 01/14/09 07:41 AM
Excellent! love Loved it.

brwnkimba's photo
Wed 01/14/09 04:11 PM
Very sweet of you allflowerforyou and thank you for taking the time to read my ramblings.:heart:

Jess642's photo
Thu 01/15/09 01:22 PM
Wonder how she sees you......:wink:



:heart:

Noden's photo
Thu 01/15/09 02:03 PM
Good Golly Miss Molly!!!tongue2

Wow now, that was something now wasn't it
...it was so wickedly wild.
You gave an eloquent texture to your subject
and feasted her with amber's of the purest scents
blushed her essence, with your soaring heart
as your spear

one day...one day soon

she'll appear:thumbsup: waving winking

brwnkimba's photo
Fri 01/16/09 04:13 PM
Jess & Noden thank you very much and Noden the words you bless me with are affecting my heart in a strange 'silly boy' type of way.

Jess there isn't anyone in specific I'm talking about, just women in general bring this out of me. Funny thing is the last relationship I was in she didn't even read my poetry.

kc0003's photo
Sun 01/18/09 09:55 AM
Edited by kc0003 on Sun 01/18/09 09:57 AM
smokin

again, life bleeds from your pen...well done...

Fadedspirit's photo
Sun 01/18/09 10:19 PM
Very nice.

You've got a strong heart and it shows well bro.

TxsGal3333's photo
Mon 01/19/09 01:15 AM
Your words have so much depth and soul poured within them I could not image another not wanting to read your words. You know though it seems that those that I have come in contact with that do not read my words I wonder for they really do not know me or my thoughts. Therefore makes you wonder why even waste your time if they don't acknowledge the words you write from the heart do they really want to know you?

good write bigsmile

brwnkimba's photo
Mon 01/19/09 08:44 AM
I'm so sorry it's taken a while to respond kc0003, Fadedspirit & TxsGal3333 but my computer crashed over the weekend and I haven't been on until now.

THANK YOU ALL AND HAPPY DR.KING DAY

p.s. TxsGal3333 you are so right and it really took me a long time to see clearly that it just wasn't a good fit. Hell I'd give flowers(that I grew) with the poetry and it was like "oh ahh, thanks".

jimz's photo
Tue 01/20/09 11:04 AM



I go and wish for the best love you can accept willfully with trust & passion.
Is that too much for 1 so lovely, what man can offer this flawless wish granted?
Who holds the key to unlock your door for Heaven on this Earth?
Free and fresh as a child’s first blessed breathe on New Years day at birth.
Never alone, with the belief that all will enrapture and acknowledge her invaluable worth.
Need you my Queen for 1 thing, it’s all but a command as I will happily search.
Want for not, never made to wait, discover the last true gentleman who’ll insure your good fate.
Her tactics are larcenist at capturing heart favors with ease.
Make the fear of feeling emotions well hidden ascend relieving as summer breeze.
The oceans still with every wave stunned at her visage.
Her routine is daily assertion of positivity giving the underdog all the applause.
She’s true monarchy from the soul with royal taste in place.
It’s how innocence portrayed guilty pleasures and won the worlds embrace.
To bring balance is a Libran skill and something needed by all.
Without this tool in your life box you may walk but find it much easier to fall.
I’ll be the gesture of affection vested solely in her protection expecting little or no return.
Well tuned this enchanted instrument that swoons at the mention of her with sweet sentiment, as deep within the fire burns.
This woman leaves me humble as she teaches me what I so desperately need to exist.
Wrought with loves crafty guidance and kissed by her rose colored faultless lips.




AWESOME!

TxsGal3333's photo
Wed 01/21/09 11:26 AM

p.s. TxsGal3333 you are so right and it really took me a long time to see clearly that it just wasn't a good fit. Hell I'd give flowers(that I grew) with the poetry and it was like "oh ahh, thanks".


Humm that my friend is not only a wave from the red flag but a slap in the face. May you find a woman that has a heart as big as your's and love that flows like a waterfall.flowers