Community > Posts By > Fadedspirit
Topic:
Clear Stone
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Ahh, a crystal is a crystal, dirty or clean. They are all a treasure in the eyes of a beholder. Well done Sharris.
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Topic:
the fiddle
Edited by
Fadedspirit
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Mon 09/07/09 01:29 AM
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Pictures such as this share so many things. Very nicely done.
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Topic:
share my heart
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You share your heart so wonderfully Queene123. Very Nice.
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Topic:
"which little poem?"
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Nice write Fusion99. I really like the spectrum of this write. Simply and complexly enjoyable.
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Topic:
Here I Am
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Here's something I felt to write. Hope y'all like it.
Here I Am Here am I But what ever am I for? To some maybe friendship To others even more. To some I am a nuisance To others a huge pain And every now and then There's a friend that may be gained. I maybe slow and witty Though sometimes dull and fast My spirit's never ending Though my fading never lasts. To my friends I'm known as crazy, caring And to those who know me well Not to push aside MsTeddy But I'm a little bear. My writing could be better Though not any more than most So many here are talented Moreso than this ghost. We all are formed a family Or society at the best While we share our cared for writing Others may be blessed. Enriched is my own life To see so many souls Bearing these great riches In these varied useful posts. So here I sit before you And you ask whatever for My reply, "to be that something That I've never been before." Dedicated to all my friends and writers here in the mingle forums. You can be or do anything through writing. Fadedspirit 9/6/2009 |
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Topic:
Faded
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Ahh, well, I rarely wear or try to wear a halo DKW dear.....lol. I thought I heard voices in the wind. I'm here, just been very busy and miss everyone. Thanks for the write, it was very nice!
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Topic:
The Awakening
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Aww, thanx (((MSTeddy)))
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Topic:
The Awakening
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Thanks Fusion99, if ya wanna read more, I've littered the forum with a lot of my work.
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Topic:
The Awakening
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Aww thanks Mystique! I'm doing well, just busy. Take care my friend.
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Topic:
The Awakening
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No need to worry DKW, I've just been very very very busy. Thanks for worrying though. *hugs*
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Topic:
I'd Paint You Beautiful
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Aww, that was very nice. Well painted my friend.
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Topic:
A Rose
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Very nicely done.
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Topic:
the moon
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There's a feeling of peace, beauty and wisdom here. Very nice Queene123.
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Topic:
And Soon
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Very nice Sharris. As always, your writes are so endearing.
A voice from the darkness Within midnight's grasp Offers to you A subtile comfort to last. Witnessed by moonlight Beheld by the stars A tune forever unending Endeared in your heart. |
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Topic:
The Awakening
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Very true Ainjel. I'm glad you liked it and thanks for reading.
Aww, thanks Sharris It's good to see you as well. Thanks for reading. |
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Topic:
The Awakening
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The Awakening
'Neath crimson moon Mists cling to the earth Disturbed in the silence A raven returns. In dust left to settle Memories rush in Where a human remains Death wasn't the end. Slowly shapes form In this darkness of pain, Bearing great scars Revived once again. Memories of torment Still fresh in the soul Speaking so loudly Dirt's heaved with a groan. Reborn into mortal existance Like a beast taunted to rage Bound to the earth Like bird in a cage. Thrown once again Onto the mercy of life Complete with it's challenges, Loves, forgiveness, and strife. Fadedspirit 8/27/2009 |
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Topic:
Forbidden Memory
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Forbidden Memory
The past is but a remnant Twisted in a life Abandoned dreams are mounted Caught within their sea of strife... Feel the mortal maddness While a stone heart beats so cold Falling tears in darkness Break the seal of stories yet untold. A rapture of depression stirs Within a shadow's place, A lonesome figure looming there Forbids the light's embrace. Feel within the madness that mortals only know In darkness fall the tears While a heart grows as cold as stone. The morbid sting of life's injection Heralds the prideful mourn of loss... A stagnant mind bewildered By the paths it once had crossed. Beholden once to life Now just a memory fathoms deep A docile soul forgotten Within a darkened keep. Bonds of love are stripped away That kissed this tainted soul, Broken are the seals of fate Which unbind a memory's hold. Left to thoughts in darkness Alone a war is waged Beneath a crimson moon Where this human once was slain. Fadedspirit 8/5/2009 |
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Topic:
For Every Path....
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Thanks AngelLight
I agree wholeheartedly with your scenario, I like the way its phrased by the way. The redemption that is refered to here is an inward redemption of the self, something that a lot of people struggle with. Maybe it makes better sense understanding it that way. Aww, thanks writer_gurl, I'm glad you liked it. |
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Topic:
For Every Path....
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Thank you BonnyMiss and you're very welcome.
LOL DKW....For those of us that are backasswards, I just say sit back and enjoy the ride. hee hee Good to see you again also (((MsTeddyBear)))! All is well here. Thanks for commenting. Aww, thanks pkh, it's good to see you as well. |
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Topic:
For Every Path....
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For Every Path....
With every newborn life An adventure must begin, With every passing moment An adventure soon must end. For every wish that's granted A freedom's lost it's choice, For every vote that's counted A vote has lost it's voice. Take heed in life's decisions And always give to thought For outcomes play a part Where "why" is always sought. Be careful what you wish for The words you wish to say Be careful what may happen In giving thoughts such faith. There are many sides to life Too many, to be sure Two sides always opposing One brazen, one demure. Be given unto wisdom And less into what's craved For redemption is a road That's seldom ever paved. Fadedspirit 7/28/2009 |
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