Topic: Only make believe
greeneyedlady42's photo
Sun 01/18/09 05:35 PM
It was only make believe
The way I thot that it would be;
The smile that came across your face
Had nothing to do with me-

It was only my imagination
Your heart was somewhere else
You never felt any love
Except the love of yourself

I was an opportunity
My heart slung open wide
and I gave so freely
All it held inside

But you took, then took some more
Thats all you know to do
Everybody warned me
But I saw the best in you-

But standing here now
with my empty heart
All it holds is tears
I realize why I shut me off
And lived behind my fears.

Its a cruel world Im sad to say
theres on heart break on both sides-
Those who believe and those who dont
and we all wonder why?

The ones who believed got taken
and now their faith is gone
Those who didnt- see why they dont
And just keep moving along.


directandwrite's photo
Sun 01/18/09 05:36 PM
Beautiful poem! flowerforyou

writer_gurl's photo
Sun 01/18/09 05:43 PM
sad :smile: :angel:

greeneyedlady42's photo
Sun 01/18/09 05:47 PM
blushing
Thank you
Its very sad that tragedy makes for such GREAT writing!!!

Tressia

no photo
Sun 01/18/09 07:02 PM

It was only make believe
The way I thot that it would be;
The smile that came across your face
Had nothing to do with me-

It was only my imagination
Your heart was somewhere else
You never felt any love
Except the love of yourself

I was an opportunity
My heart slung open wide
and I gave so freely
All it held inside

But you took, then took some more
Thats all you know to do
Everybody warned me
But I saw the best in you-

But standing here now
with my empty heart
All it holds is tears
I realize why I shut me off
And lived behind my fears.

Its a cruel world Im sad to say
theres on heart break on both sides-
Those who believe and those who dont
and we all wonder why?

The ones who believed got taken
and now their faith is gone
Those who didnt- see why they dont
And just keep moving along.



Its GREAT to read you here again and to see your new pic,,,wow,,I like,,wink,
I hope your heart is healing well and that you can find some smiles to show off,,,,Lov ya Tress..:heart:

This was very NICE!!!drinker

Timis76's photo
Sun 01/18/09 09:44 PM
Well done

Fadedspirit's photo
Sun 01/18/09 10:09 PM
Very nice.

A heart and life are never as empty as they seem at the time.

no photo
Sun 01/18/09 10:22 PM
:heart: beautiful :heart:

TxsGal3333's photo
Mon 01/19/09 01:09 AM
Awesome write as always, sad we never know them when we think we do.flowerforyou

greeneyedlady42's photo
Tue 01/20/09 05:38 AM
Oh yes- how ture, but you know we always come to know ourselves better and thats a good thing.

iamgeorgiagirl's photo
Tue 01/20/09 05:34 PM
tears sad :heart: sad tears


Good job!

LAMom's photo
Tue 01/20/09 08:55 PM
flowers