I've weak nerves, I give in..

Ok, one more clue
You hear a twig crack, in the stillness of a jungle night.

All right Daisy, there's no wrong answer unless I give a clue.
so here it is, (if you are still around).

ha,ha; completely mood changing

it's from a school poem.

Which poem comes to mind when you imagine the sudden roar in the stillness of a jungle night.

If OP was a guy I would have suggested watching Dinklage's speech to Bennington's Class of 2012

But since OP is a girl, with twice the problem men have; (although women have twice the intelligence; something they say has to do with denser networking between the L & R brain hemispheres) I suggest she watch it twice.

No I'm serious.

As the OP is relatively young, the first time for herself
and the second time for the guy she would like to meet.






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If this is true
I envy you

[another example of piracy]

Ha ha ha, then you should fear me.
I haven't perfected the art but here's a sample i stole from a recent innocent.

the stairs to paradise,
has steps that mesmerize,
with sinning dreams, visualized;
Eyes locked, now hypnotized

For some of us stealing is as natural as dreaming.
Now a few more thefts and the right mood; the stair would complete. ha ha ha

At last
Are you angry?
Then bind me in your arms
Kiss and makeup, ow, don't bite lips
They bleed

[if you guys don't like the flirtatious turn
well, the lines are from ancient Sanskrit..,]

Dear Delightful,
You made a nice comment and it made me think a bit. Here are my responses:

1. Where to punctuate when eyes race from legs to hip then breasts to lips and blue eyes startle and goldy locks flip and in all this flipping unspoken words reach him [don't forget me] hurling him into an abyss whence he may never climb out.

Now this is a piece full of fighting words, won't get me friends. On the other hand...

2. In OP's poem he has used capitals as his conversational punctuation


He set the mood in the first four words: 'Her sexy long walk' and then brazenly goes on to 'hip pose was stunning'. I don't intend to psychoanalyze on these now; but if he had not skipped 'breasts', the poem would have bordered around locker room talk. He got away because he rushed us through to 'eyes and smiles' and did this by not using punctuation.

3. All these would have been trivial had the comment not reminded me of Dickens where he used lengthy sentences in his book Hard Times, a mockery on life in an industrial town; which in turn leads me to hypothesize that a sentence driven by contents needs lesser punctuation.

Your views please.

To Exandrine,
I hope you don't mind using your poem as a study.

Waiting
for rains raining?
Sex ached clod don't you read
Thou shalt not steal thy neighbors wife
Watching

Let's not overlook that with Windows 7 we were in control. With Win 10, all files are visible to MS. For example, one cannot permanently delete Cortana.

Hello A Ai,
Techno's comment: 'sweet', is right. The way you describe stars and Love in terms of mesmerizing - something in this cause the word mesmerize is generally associated with dark skills. You just showed us it can be used as deep reflection.
All powers to you, A Ai.

True, very few women can walk like that. Haven't seen any, lately.

vanish?
Like addiction
am I hooked forever
to rhythms of butterflies flights
Oh God

A very clear and concise philosophy,
written from the left hemisphere

they say,
Love resides in the right hemisphere

i now,
shorted my brain
counting syllables, 6;
cheating? get arrested! no wait;
vanish

Dogma
proverbs bundled,
Hello Hate, written there,
Love occurs when hate understood
Bye Hate

let's say 1 off 10 women are beautiful.
So what happens to remaining 9 ?
(a passing thought)

Chennai, India (South): Nice weather this NY morning.
Few cloud formations, been generally dry,
Metro guys say, low reserves, may run short in water supply this summer.