Topic: Its you
A ai's photo
Thu 12/20/18 03:34 PM
Edited by A ai on Thu 12/20/18 04:01 PM
The stars make the darkest night a paradise
That makes you think and get mesmmerize
And even in dream you really do it visuallize
It seems the beauty of stars makes you truely hypnotized

Is like seeing him like a star in your darkest life
And make you feel save from his light
Hoping and wishing it will be a lifetime
Hope he will stay the same of being mine.:heart:

technovative's photo
Thu 12/20/18 03:52 PM
A sweet poem. Welcome to mingle2, A ai. Looking forward to reading more from you.

A ai's photo
Thu 12/20/18 04:02 PM
Thank you..:wink:

Palghat's photo
Fri 01/04/19 03:21 AM
Hello A Ai,
Techno's comment: 'sweet', is right. The way you describe stars and Love in terms of mesmerizing - something in this cause the word mesmerize is generally associated with dark skills. You just showed us it can be used as deep reflection.
All powers to you, A Ai.


A ai's photo
Tue 02/05/19 08:55 PM

Hello A Ai,
Techno's comment: 'sweet', is right. The way you describe stars and Love in terms of mesmerizing - something in this cause the word mesmerize is generally associated with dark skills. You just showed us it can be used as deep reflection.
All powers to you, A Ai.





Thanks you