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A ai
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Thu 12/20/18 04:01 PM
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The stars make the darkest night a paradise
That makes you think and get mesmmerize And even in dream you really do it visuallize It seems the beauty of stars makes you truely hypnotized Is like seeing him like a star in your darkest life And make you feel save from his light Hoping and wishing it will be a lifetime Hope he will stay the same of being mine. |
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A sweet poem. Welcome to mingle2, A ai. Looking forward to reading more from you.
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Thank you..
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Hello A Ai,
Techno's comment: 'sweet', is right. The way you describe stars and Love in terms of mesmerizing - something in this cause the word mesmerize is generally associated with dark skills. You just showed us it can be used as deep reflection. All powers to you, A Ai. |
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Hello A Ai, Techno's comment: 'sweet', is right. The way you describe stars and Love in terms of mesmerizing - something in this cause the word mesmerize is generally associated with dark skills. You just showed us it can be used as deep reflection. All powers to you, A Ai. Thanks you |
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