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Topic: I Should Learn To Write
kc0003's photo
Sun 11/01/09 11:15 AM
Edited by kc0003 on Sun 11/01/09 12:06 PM
I’ve heard it said unrequited love is the fuel that burns the poet’s heart
well, this one is a raging inferno
A fiery testament to loves drowning resolve
Its flames fan out
ahead of my meager words,
past all I would view as practical yet,
never igniting even
the driest of brush

I have waited for you,
a lifetime

Have I not been patient enough?

Am I not deserving of your love?

Is it my destiny to always live with this burning desire,
this, discontented sentiment

Then perhaps I should learn to write

Become a poet or a blacksmith
My heart could heat brands of my own design
Glowing red hot verses,
I could burn to your eyes

Would you see me then?

Would you understand?

I might compare you to the sunrise
if not for the fact that your beauty extends far beyond its rays

Or the moon
but, there are times when a simple cloud can veil its existence

I could tell you that
I wish your whispers to rest
tenderly on pillows
and softly disappear
into the quiet of night or
that I long to hear your throaty,
moans and heavenly sighs
echo throughout this room,
until they melt away
and evaporate into the safety
of these thirsty walls


Or as others have done;
I could use the gentle flowing river,
a serene meadow,
the vast stars or the common flower
and these would suffice, for most

But, not for you

You are a rarity on this earth
and my love for you is more deserving than a cliché

More complex than I can explain

Yes I should learn to write

With you as my muse
My inspiration
My tablet
Words to give you sight
Rhyme to lend credence to my phrase
Entire books devoted to you, to love

Kisses would fall
in perfect verse
Touch will liquefy
resistance
and passion will ignite in you that which
has forever burned in me
my love
for you

A longing deeply rooted in the sedimentary rock
of my bed, my foundation
Only then will I become whole

Only then will I realize life’s worth
and shed this moniker of Spartan

I can join the ranks of the living,
the loved
The men who breathe free
The awake

I should learn to write

For you
For me
For all those who feel nothing
and for the ones that know how I feel
without you

Without love




kc09

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Sun 11/01/09 01:47 PM
really nice write

my friend you CAN write




drinker drinker

Gossipmpm's photo
Sun 11/01/09 02:01 PM
Love it!!!!:heart:

Sharris's photo
Sun 11/01/09 02:04 PM
mirrored reflections
beautiful

Dragoness's photo
Sun 11/01/09 02:19 PM
Nice. I should learn to write, not you.....lolflowerforyou

kc0003's photo
Sun 11/01/09 04:34 PM
thamk you

david....drinker


gossip....flowerforyou



kc0003's photo
Sun 11/01/09 04:36 PM

mirrored reflections
beautiful





thank you very much

flowerforyou

kc0003's photo
Sun 11/01/09 04:40 PM

Nice. I should learn to write, not you.....lolflowerforyou






maybe we can be study partners...lol
thank you for stopping in

flowers

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Sun 11/01/09 04:40 PM
You should just keep writing...Awesome write...

kc0003's photo
Sun 11/01/09 04:42 PM

You should just keep writing...Awesome write...




awwwww thank you.....blushing flowerforyou

Differentkindofwench's photo
Sun 11/01/09 06:17 PM
Oh my, NOW, I know the meaning of the phrase loquacious to a fault.........

kc0003's photo
Sun 11/01/09 06:48 PM

Oh my, NOW, I know the meaning of the phrase loquacious to a fault.........




so much for subtlety huh? .... laugh

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Sun 11/01/09 08:28 PM
is that what you call it? slaphead



kc0003's photo
Sun 11/01/09 11:09 PM

is that what you call it? slaphead









no she called it i was just thinking aloud...laugh
you are certainly free to call it anything you wish...:tongue:

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Mon 11/02/09 02:45 AM
:heart:

kc0003's photo
Mon 11/02/09 02:57 AM
thank you ms. t bear flowerforyou

pkh's photo
Mon 11/02/09 05:28 AM
awesome write your one of my favorites

MzEm's photo
Mon 11/02/09 07:28 AM
Simply wonderful...delightfully complex....beautifully written....Thank you for knowing how to write...

HuckleberryFinn's photo
Mon 11/02/09 08:12 AM
You are a rarity on this earth
and my love for you is more deserving than a cliché

^love does seem like a bad cliche' these days does it not...nicely done

kc0003's photo
Mon 11/02/09 02:25 PM

awesome write your one of my favorites





thank you pam....but, we are not supposed to have favorites..laugh

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