someone first
called her Sin
when she didnt
deserve to be
like the rest
she mixed the smokes
of the earth
that caused her fog

i met her
with a man
named Virtue
he was really
a dirty old man
who told riddles
and cheated
at checkers

i loved Sin
and some say
i still due
i mean do
sorry

Passion is a hanger on
to anything im into
she is a wild heathen
i can never tame her

well back to Sin
i love her though
she stole from me
and to this day
she wont admit it

Sin leave me be
but come here
i got some money
and nothing to do
ill hide in your kiss
one more time

we have our vice don't we?

good write my friend...

Loved it....

Cool write (((Jimmy)))

good write

named Virtue
he was really
a dirty old man
who told riddles
and cheated
at checkers

^f-ing hilarious...this relates so much to life and the thinking of mankind, I enjoyed the whole thing throughout. Very imaginative....

Very nice Jim...

enjoyed