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... My Greatest Performance ...
... it was the greaaaatest performance of my life !!! i pretended it was well pretended all was swell it was my moment ... and what a moment ... ... it was the greatest deception of my life i deceived my heart to heights with a shaman's tongue convinced it i was right eyes shrouded in darkness i blamed the truth gall... presumption... uncouth said of blindness 'tis the light co-opted pride for the myth of might as did Peter the Truth, denied I thrice ... and in the end ... not a friend not a fan no doting loner ... ... it was the truuuuuest moment of my life !!! alone with self devoid of wealth yet blessed with health it was my salvation .... and what salvation .... if you were there laid I in fear when my soul fell my courage was spent relegated with head bent you would see that this child was frightened although a man craved mother's hand even the grave has maternal welcome then the savage winter of lies' finality exhumed me from self induced insanity where not even the unbelieving nods of approval trod i faced the truth that savage brute still, my dearest friend spent i there 13 moons among life's failures ... that was the greaaaatest performance of my life !!! ... |
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iam4u
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Mon 11/09/09 08:57 PM
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Like the words in your write,
no one here has yet to give you light. this is sad and I feel ashamed for you my friend, have not gained your fame. To all who writes upon these pages, they do it not for any wages. Just to be read and viewed, never chewed. Do not think that this was bad, its these readers who should feel sad. Your write is top self, like full of grace, and should be felt by all this human race. GREAT JOB MAN.....and YOU sir,,have MY REPLY! |
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Like the words in your write, no one here has yet to give you light. this is sad and I feel ashamed for you my friend, have not gained your fame. To all who writes upon these pages, they do it not for any wages. Just to be read and viewed, never chewed. Do not think that this was bad, its these readers who should feel sad. Your write is top self, like full of grace, and should be felt by all this human race. GREAT JOB MAN.....and YOU sir,,have MY REPLY! ...IAM4U...you my friend are a Gentleman .... Thank you 4 the words. |
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welcome
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Nice work!
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NOW THATS WHAT IM TALKIN BOUT!!!!!!!!! THERE'S THE LOVE MAN....... YOU FOLKS HERE,,,,,well,,,,,I just gotta say it,,,,,,, :::::::::YOU ALL ROCK, FOLKS""""""""""""""and I just roll lol. |
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welcome Thank U 4 the welcome |
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Nice work! Thanks for the comp. |
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I appreciate... |
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NOW THATS WHAT IM TALKIN BOUT!!!!!!!!! THERE'S THE LOVE MAN....... YOU FOLKS HERE,,,,,well,,,,,I just gotta say it,,,,,,, :::::::::YOU ALL ROCK, FOLKS""""""""""""""and I just roll lol. IAM4U ... You are an incorrigible optimist... U r a good soul my friend... thanks... be well |
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good one keep up the good work.....
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... My Greatest Performance ... ... it was the greaaaatest performance of my life !!! i pretended it was well pretended all was swell it was my moment ... and what a moment ... ... it was the greatest deception of my life i deceived my heart to heights with a shaman's tongue convinced it i was right eyes shrouded in darkness i blamed the truth gall... presumption... uncouth said of blindness 'tis the light co-opted pride for the myth of might as did Peter the Truth, denied I thrice ... and in the end ... not a friend not a fan no doting loner ... ... it was the truuuuuest moment of my life !!! alone with self devoid of wealth yet blessed with health it was my salvation .... and what salvation .... if you were there laid I in fear when my soul fell my courage was spent relegated with head bent you would see that this child was frightened although a man craved mother's hand even the grave has maternal welcome then the savage winter of lies' finality exhumed me from self induced insanity where not even the unbelieving nods of approval trod i faced the truth that savage brute still, my dearest friend spent i there 13 moons among life's failures ... that was the greaaaatest performance of my life !!! ... awesome!!! |
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good one keep up the good work..... TxsGal...appreciate the compliment... |
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... My Greatest Performance ... ... it was the greaaaatest performance of my life !!! i pretended it was well pretended all was swell it was my moment ... and what a moment ... ... it was the greatest deception of my life i deceived my heart to heights with a shaman's tongue convinced it i was right eyes shrouded in darkness i blamed the truth gall... presumption... uncouth said of blindness 'tis the light co-opted pride for the myth of might as did Peter the Truth, denied I thrice ... and in the end ... not a friend not a fan no doting loner ... ... it was the truuuuuest moment of my life !!! alone with self devoid of wealth yet blessed with health it was my salvation .... and what salvation .... if you were there laid I in fear when my soul fell my courage was spent relegated with head bent you would see that this child was frightened although a man craved mother's hand even the grave has maternal welcome then the savage winter of lies' finality exhumed me from self induced insanity where not even the unbelieving nods of approval trod i faced the truth that savage brute still, my dearest friend spent i there 13 moons among life's failures ... that was the greaaaatest performance of my life !!! ... awesome!!! ....JIMZ ... thank u |
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