Topic: ... my greatest performance ...
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Mon 11/09/09 07:37 PM
... My Greatest Performance ...



... it was the greaaaatest performance of my life !!!
i pretended it was well
pretended all was swell
it was my moment
... and what a moment ...

... it was the greatest deception of my life
i deceived my heart to heights
with a shaman's tongue
convinced it i was right

eyes shrouded in darkness
i blamed the truth
gall... presumption... uncouth
said of blindness 'tis the light
co-opted pride
for the myth of might
as did Peter the Truth,
denied I thrice


... and in the end ...


not a friend
not a fan
no doting loner ...

... it was the truuuuuest moment of my life !!!
alone with self
devoid of wealth
yet blessed with health
it was my salvation
.... and what salvation ....

if you were there
laid I in fear
when my soul fell
my courage was spent
relegated with head bent
you would see that
this child was frightened

although a man
craved mother's hand
even the grave
has maternal welcome

then the savage winter of lies' finality
exhumed me from self induced insanity
where not even the unbelieving nods of approval trod

i faced the truth
that savage brute
still, my dearest friend
spent i there 13 moons
among life's failures

... that was the greaaaatest performance of my life !!! ...

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Mon 11/09/09 08:55 PM
Edited by iam4u on Mon 11/09/09 08:57 PM
Like the words in your write,
no one here has yet to give you light.
this is sad and I feel ashamed
for you my friend, have not gained your fame.
To all who writes upon these pages,
they do it not for any wages.
Just to be read and viewed, never chewed.
Do not think that this was bad,
its these readers who should feel sad.
Your write is top self, like full of grace,
and should be felt by all this human race.

GREAT JOB MAN.....and YOU sir,,have MY REPLY!drinker :wink:

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Tue 11/10/09 02:06 PM

Like the words in your write,
no one here has yet to give you light.
this is sad and I feel ashamed
for you my friend, have not gained your fame.
To all who writes upon these pages,
they do it not for any wages.
Just to be read and viewed, never chewed.
Do not think that this was bad,
its these readers who should feel sad.
Your write is top self, like full of grace,
and should be felt by all this human race.

GREAT JOB MAN.....and YOU sir,,have MY REPLY!drinker :wink:

drinker drinks ...IAM4U...you my friend are a Gentleman .... Thank you 4 the words.

pkh's photo
Tue 11/10/09 02:30 PM
welcome

MzEm's photo
Tue 11/10/09 06:11 PM
Nice work!

Gossipmpm's photo
Tue 11/10/09 06:16 PM
:heart:

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Tue 11/10/09 06:20 PM
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flowerforyou NOW THATS WHAT IM TALKIN BOUT!!!!!!!!!



THERE'S THE LOVE MAN.......drinker



YOU FOLKS HERE,,,,,well,,,,,I just gotta say it,,,,,,,


:::::::::YOU ALL ROCK, FOLKS""""""""""""""and I just rollrofl lol.

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Wed 11/11/09 05:53 PM

welcome



Thank U 4 the welcome

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Wed 11/11/09 05:54 PM

Nice work!


Thanks for the comp.

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Wed 11/11/09 05:54 PM

:heart:


I appreciate...


:heart:

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Wed 11/11/09 05:56 PM

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flowerforyou NOW THATS WHAT IM TALKIN BOUT!!!!!!!!!



THERE'S THE LOVE MAN.......drinker



YOU FOLKS HERE,,,,,well,,,,,I just gotta say it,,,,,,,


:::::::::YOU ALL ROCK, FOLKS""""""""""""""and I just rollrofl lol.



IAM4U ... bigsmile You are an incorrigible optimist... U r a good soul my friend... thanks... be well

TxsGal3333's photo
Wed 11/11/09 07:22 PM
good one keep up the good work.....:thumbsup:

jimz's photo
Thu 11/12/09 07:22 AM

... My Greatest Performance ...



... it was the greaaaatest performance of my life !!!
i pretended it was well
pretended all was swell
it was my moment
... and what a moment ...

... it was the greatest deception of my life
i deceived my heart to heights
with a shaman's tongue
convinced it i was right

eyes shrouded in darkness
i blamed the truth
gall... presumption... uncouth
said of blindness 'tis the light
co-opted pride
for the myth of might
as did Peter the Truth,
denied I thrice


... and in the end ...


not a friend
not a fan
no doting loner ...

... it was the truuuuuest moment of my life !!!
alone with self
devoid of wealth
yet blessed with health
it was my salvation
.... and what salvation ....

if you were there
laid I in fear
when my soul fell
my courage was spent
relegated with head bent
you would see that
this child was frightened

although a man
craved mother's hand
even the grave
has maternal welcome

then the savage winter of lies' finality
exhumed me from self induced insanity
where not even the unbelieving nods of approval trod

i faced the truth
that savage brute
still, my dearest friend
spent i there 13 moons
among life's failures

... that was the greaaaatest performance of my life !!! ...



awesome!!!

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Thu 11/12/09 04:18 PM

good one keep up the good work.....:thumbsup:


flowerforyou TxsGal...appreciate the compliment...

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Thu 11/12/09 04:19 PM


... My Greatest Performance ...



... it was the greaaaatest performance of my life !!!
i pretended it was well
pretended all was swell
it was my moment
... and what a moment ...

... it was the greatest deception of my life
i deceived my heart to heights
with a shaman's tongue
convinced it i was right

eyes shrouded in darkness
i blamed the truth
gall... presumption... uncouth
said of blindness 'tis the light
co-opted pride
for the myth of might
as did Peter the Truth,
denied I thrice


... and in the end ...


not a friend
not a fan
no doting loner ...

... it was the truuuuuest moment of my life !!!
alone with self
devoid of wealth
yet blessed with health
it was my salvation
.... and what salvation ....

if you were there
laid I in fear
when my soul fell
my courage was spent
relegated with head bent
you would see that
this child was frightened

although a man
craved mother's hand
even the grave
has maternal welcome

then the savage winter of lies' finality
exhumed me from self induced insanity
where not even the unbelieving nods of approval trod

i faced the truth
that savage brute
still, my dearest friend
spent i there 13 moons
among life's failures

... that was the greaaaatest performance of my life !!! ...



awesome!!!



drinker :thumbsup: ....JIMZ ... thank u