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“It’s a Sad World” Take a look and look all around. It seems that this world is being taken down. No one believes that love is to share. No longer do they seem to even care. What has happened in this day and time? It seems to love another is but a crime. I have sat back and watched day after day. This thing called hate is coming our way. No matter what we do it seems to stay. What do we need to do to make it go away? I see when others freely give their heart. Just to have another tear it apart. I do not understand what has happened anymore. Or how much more can there be in store. Is there a story that must be told? Have we all become so cold? We no longer have a heart nor do we care. Are we that far gone and unaware. We need to look around us and see. How lonely without love this world will be. K.L.M 11/9/2009 |
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Very beautifully written.
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wonderful Kristi...thanks you
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Very beautifully written. Thank you for your kind words |
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wonderful Kristi...thanks you No thank you for reading |
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iam4u
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Mon 11/09/09 09:51 PM
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I feel the box we use to have ta step out of to see the real world,,,,,NOW engulfs our boundaries to high, to climb out......
A wonderful piece, and truth,,and if only the WORLD could not for one day,,,STOP and read this and explore the multitudes of discoveries they could find....to just see and feel,,,each other. |
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Another beautiful write,nice to see you here
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Simply wonderful! Beautiful....
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I feel the box we use to have ta step out of to see the real world,,,,,NOW engulfs our boundaries to high, to climb out...... A wonderful piece, and truth,,and if only the WORLD could not for one day,,,STOP and read this and explore the multitudes of discoveries they could find....to just see and feel,,,each other. Thank you for your kind words and reading.... |
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very nice Kristi
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WOW!
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“It’s a Sad World” Take a look and look all around. It seems that this world is being taken down. No one believes that love is to share. No longer do they seem to even care. What has happened in this day and time? It seems to love another is but a crime. I have sat back and watched day after day. This thing called hate is coming our way. No matter what we do it seems to stay. What do we need to do to make it go away? I see when others freely give their heart. Just to have another tear it apart. I do not understand what has happened anymore. Or how much more can there be in store. Is there a story that must be told? Have we all become so cold? We no longer have a heart nor do we care. Are we that far gone and unaware. We need to look around us and see. How lonely without love this world will be. K.L.M 11/9/2009 "How lonely without love this world will be." So true...so reflective... |
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OMG she does again, how true this is she speaks. It is sad and doesn't seem to really have any answers either. Nor does it change. Great poem.
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