Topic: one more step...
kalunda's photo
Fri 08/21/09 10:42 AM
evening is the days long sigh of relief...
anticipation of the night...praying for dreams...

remember the comfort of knowing you're loved...
the strength that it gave you...
the joy of giving your all to someone...
and them giving all to you.

remember the oblivion reached, touching one anothers skin...
never forget the joy of loving, never give up the search for me...

I am here, filled with anticipation, longing for you...
you...me...everyone & everything...may be just one more step away...


wannacuddlewthme's photo
Fri 08/21/09 11:24 AM
Nice writedrinker

MzEm's photo
Fri 08/21/09 11:48 AM
I always enjoy your writing. I is just sublime...

MirrorMirror's photo
Fri 08/21/09 12:53 PM

evening is the days long sigh of relief...
anticipation of the night...praying for dreams...

remember the comfort of knowing you're loved...
the strength that it gave you...
the joy of giving your all to someone...
and them giving all to you.

remember the oblivion reached, touching one anothers skin...
never forget the joy of loving, never give up the search for me...

I am here, filled with anticipation, longing for you...
you...me...everyone & everything...may be just one more step away...


:thumbsup:

Gossipmpm's photo
Fri 08/21/09 01:34 PM
Everythings moving so fast.....

Didn't see ya here!! LOL

Love to the write!:heart:

Tammy

Differentkindofwench's photo
Fri 08/21/09 01:42 PM
flowerforyou Mr. Kal, nice soul soother.

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Fri 08/21/09 03:05 PM
I love the way you put this...
So much eaiser to just think of a step at a time,
and the next step...
{{{H}}} smooched smitten

Never giving up! drinks
The anticipation might kill me though laugh :wink:
It made me think of this song by Carly Simon-
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Anticipation

We can never know about the days to come
But we think about them anyway
And I wonder if I'm really with you now
Or just chasing after some finer day.

Anticipation, Anticipation
Is making me late
Is keeping me waiting

And I tell you how easy it is to be with you
And how right your arms feel around me.
Bit I rehearsed those words just late last night
When I was thinking about how right tonight might be.

Anticipation, Anticipation
Is making me late
Is keeping me waiting

And tomorrow we might not be together
I'm no prophet, I don't know natures way
So I'll try to see into your eyes right now
And stay right here, 'cause these are the good old days.
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kalunda's photo
Fri 08/21/09 07:37 PM
flowerforyou love carly tooblushing

bropoet's photo
Fri 08/21/09 08:02 PM
Passion, and compassion... Very nice I was really moved by this one.

BP

no photo
Sat 08/22/09 06:12 AM
a feeling you write what your heart feels and thinks..rings true....teasingbrunette