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rite on ,,,,, to bad some humans that do horrible crimes couldn't get the same !
keep writing 
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10. Unnamed
For my newly acquired friend V, I say to you sir, I hope this poem does you honor. -Peace through War- As the waxing alabaster moon crawled its way lazily up the sky The light it cast down on the planet each knew would soon mean to die The battlements clawed across the surface like blunt talons holding a glowing crystal ball Many of the battlements exploded by the fire to hydrogen causing licking flames so high The war had existed for centuries, each faction absolutely refusing to die Now that the alabaster moon had risen, was the safest time to fly Juylius Sector 12 received its light, heat and power from supplier of life, their moon As hundreds of battalions flew overhead, the main hall would be taken soon The Committee for Planetary safety had but few seconds to make a choice If the Tearians beat this planet, the other 3 in this solar system could never again rejoice For the surface of Juylius Sector 12 was the only planet to have all fuel reserves Many Haaasens lost their lives that day, and the rest would be involuntarily destroyed The Committee had decided long ago to destroy the play and leave them only a void As the moon peaked, a huge fireball of explosion vaporized the Planet and most of the fighters Eventually there would be a truce resulting in sharing knowledge that made the moons three times brighter |
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very very very impressed
you got to write a movie
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*BONUS*
Sasfire75, I hope you enjoy this and if you are having a hard time, I hope that it will bring some peace and relaxation to you. -Broken heart mending- The pain you feel so deep inside your heart, is literally tearing you apart Do not be ridged, do not allow someone else to have that part Allow your heart to bend, not stiffen, or soon all of life will be slipping……away Allow yourself to sway, each new start can be like the start of a new day And soon you’ll see the pain dissipate from your heart and life will be back Get up and step by tiny step, you’ll feel your heart forget the past and enjoy Then, in less time than you think, you’ll find yourself back on track Our hearts aren’t toys, but they were built to be strong. Keep your head on straight and listen to your brain ~Den |
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awwwe that is beautiful and so true ,, hope you look at it often while your mending .... ((((hugs to you )))it's only a detour , and will only get better
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Edited by
Sitngrin
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Wed 03/05/08 02:27 AM
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I would like to thank all of you who helped me with this tonight. it was a good concentration time and practice, so I thank you. I hope that you will all enjoy the poems, it's been pleasure writing them. Special thanks to misty4ran for the board support and "V" for the good vibe support. Only took 4 1/2 hours lmao, but I enjoyed it all, hope you did too!
Sincerely, Den |
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i give you a standing auvation you are a real sweetheart
cheers to Den for all his time and hard work he is one talented guy thanks for sharing with us
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Edited by
darkowl1
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Wed 03/05/08 03:33 AM
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wow, what comes out of little sentences and fraizes. that's pretty amazing that you were able to pull those pieces of artwork from them, standing ovation as well
thanks for your time that you shared with us. sincerely, dark owl----the ever elusive v- |
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time for you my friend to get some well earned sleep.
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ty both very much. I think I WILL go get some sleep, heh. G'night all
~Den |
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Impressive! Absolulately Great! Loved each and everyone. That was cool being able to do that alot of talent.
Thank you
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9. What was that? What was that he ask himself, taking his gun from his rack He looked around the room at all the animals he had attacked Endangered species was his least concern, he could always buy his way out He loved to hear their last scream, never offering them any mercy So what if others made new laws, he'd have exactly what he desired Suddenly, his knees went limp and his chest felt as if it were on fire Then all the pain and torment he had given to all, animal and human alike Stabbing at his soul, sharing their pain, and so would end his life *Rot in hell you evolutionary killer* - There I feel better ~Den Venting are we? lol |
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Wow talking about grabbing your attention and running away
with it that was Awesome indeed enjoyed everyone of them.
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(((BIG HUGS FOR THE TEDDY BEAR))) I hope you enjoy it! 6. How many times… How many times have I forgotten to be happy just to wake up alive… How many times should I have listened when I thought I was being told lies… How many times should I have taken five minutes, just to call a good friend… How many times have I thought of that after their life ends… How many times have I looked back said only if I had… How many times have I let someone below me make me sad.. How many times have I given thanks for family and friends How many times have I pondered how I’ll be seen in the end… ~Den
Wow they are all great!!! You are truely talented!!!
(((Sitngrin))) |
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2. A man leaving his girlfriend for Iraq As I board the bus to spend the next six months in a dirty, sandy Hell I look back at you one last time and “I love you” I hear you yell I smile at you, not letting you see all the inside fears Nothing makes me sadder than to your eyes with tears I fear that all the plans we have, the baby on the way Could end with just one bullet, intentional or stray I did however; dedicate my life to fight for the free and the brave Have no worries baby; I won’t come home in a grave I’ll step off a bus and rush immediately into your arms I’ll kiss your sweet lips, hold your soft hands, and protect you from all harm Semper Fi Xan, God's Speed ~Den I think i got some sand in my eye... hold on... Awesome poem Bro, keep up the good work! |
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Impressive! Absolulately Great! Loved each and everyone. That was cool being able to do that alot of talent. Thank you
Thank you very much, I appreciate your kind words!!
~D |
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9. What was that? What was that he ask himself, taking his gun from his rack He looked around the room at all the animals he had attacked Endangered species was his least concern, he could always buy his way out He loved to hear their last scream, never offering them any mercy So what if others made new laws, he'd have exactly what he desired Suddenly, his knees went limp and his chest felt as if it were on fire Then all the pain and torment he had given to all, animal and human alike Stabbing at his soul, sharing their pain, and so would end his life *Rot in hell you evolutionary killer* - There I feel better ~Den Venting are we? lol LOL, no just had to let my mind spread a lot and I threw that part in at the end just for fun lol ~D |
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wow, what comes out of little sentences and fraizes. that's pretty amazing that you were able to pull those pieces of artwork from them, standing ovation as well
thanks for your time that you shared with us. sincerely, dark owl----the ever elusive v- Thank you very much, V, I appreciate your kind words and someone with your talent complimenting me feels really good! ~D |
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Wow talking about grabbing your attention and running away with it that was Awesome indeed enjoyed everyone of them.
(BIG HUGS) Thank you, I'm very happy to hear that you enjoyed them!!
~Den |
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(((BIG HUGS FOR THE TEDDY BEAR))) I hope you enjoy it! 6. How many times… How many times have I forgotten to be happy just to wake up alive… How many times should I have listened when I thought I was being told lies… How many times should I have taken five minutes, just to call a good friend… How many times have I thought of that after their life ends… How many times have I looked back said only if I had… How many times have I let someone below me make me sad.. How many times have I given thanks for family and friends How many times have I pondered how I’ll be seen in the end… ~Den
Wow they are all great!!! You are truely talented!!!
(((Sitngrin))) TY Teddy, I love the words of kindness you bestowed up on me! 
~Den |
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