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Den I have a challenge... There have been a lot of tears on my end lately and I'm thinking the journey of a tear would make a nice write... What ya got for me?
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Edited by
Sitngrin
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Ok I dare you to write bout a bouncing rolling yo yo that better   
Bouncing Rolling Yo Yo Excitement filled my soul as I got my first yo yo After being in the light a while, at night it would even glow I learned how to walk the dog and every trick I could learn Only one trick alluded me; the ability to really bounce my yo yo After weeks of practice and patience, my heart was filled with joy I had finally mastered the art and became a yo you master; no longer was it just a toy! © Copyright 2008 Den Wedding. All Rights Reserved by Author. |
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Ok I dare you to write bout a bouncing rolling yo yo that better
Bouncing Rolling Yo Yo Excitement filled my soul as I got my first yo yo After being in the light a while, at night it would even glow I learned how to walk the dog and every trick I could learn Only one trick alluded me; the ability to really bounce my yo yo After weeks of practice and patience, my heart was filled with joy I had finally mastered the art and became a yo you master; no longer was it just a toy! © Copyright 2008 Den Wedding. All Rights Reserved by Author.  awww thanks your a sweety
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Anytime for you, my friend, anytime
flowerforyou: ~Den |
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Den I have a challenge... There have been a lot of tears on my end lately and I'm thinking the journey of a tear would make a nice write... What ya got for me? The Journey Of A Tear My journey begins deep inside the stomach, slowly I work my way up to the heart Along my path, I bring with me chills, escalating more and more from the start I cause physical pain, I can forcefully cause you to bend, bend right in half I spread terror throughout your entire body, I am a truly a master at my craft Eventually, I will make your eyes well up, swell and begin to sting It is amazing how I can rip you apart, how much agony I can bring I will cause your nose to run, cause you heart to break and force you to cry My life then turns to the outside world as I slow drip down from your eyes © Copyright 2008 Den Wedding. All Rights Reserved by Author. |
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Den I have a challenge... There have been a lot of tears on my end lately and I'm thinking the journey of a tear would make a nice write... What ya got for me? Humm come on Den boy where is yours hehehe I did one for this but posted it on a new post something different 
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Den I have a challenge... There have been a lot of tears on my end lately and I'm thinking the journey of a tear would make a nice write... What ya got for me? Humm come on Den boy where is yours hehehe I did one for this but posted it on a new post something different
Look up goofball
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Den I have a challenge... There have been a lot of tears on my end lately and I'm thinking the journey of a tear would make a nice write... What ya got for me? Humm come on Den boy where is yours hehehe I did one for this but posted it on a new post something different
Look up goofball
Hey goofball it was not there when I posted
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww hon another one of your best ones. i always like reading your poems they make me smile.
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Thank you so much, so make me blush lol
~Den |
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Den I have a challenge... There have been a lot of tears on my end lately and I'm thinking the journey of a tear would make a nice write... What ya got for me? The Journey Of A Tear My journey begins deep inside the stomach, slowly I work my way up to the heart Along my path, I bring with me chills, escalating more and more from the start I cause physical pain, I can forcefully cause you to bend, bend right in half I spread terror throughout your entire body, I am a truly a master at my craft Eventually, I will make your eyes well up, swell and begin to sting It is amazing how I can rip you apart, how much agony I can bring I will cause your nose to run, cause you heart to break and force you to cry My life then turns to the outside world as I slow drip down from your eyes © Copyright 2008 Den Wedding. All Rights Reserved by Author. This is beautiful and exactly what I was looking for!
Thank you Den!! |
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Awww den that is so beautiful.........thanks vicky for sharing so that he could write this most beautiful poem.
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I have another challenge for you Den!! Where you been lately btw? We're missin you!!!
The challenge is... What a soldier feels walking out of a dust cloud left over from a blast. That doesn't need to be the title or even a line in it that is just the topic. |
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ok debbie I am here
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Edited by
Sitngrin
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Fri 09/19/08 07:11 PM
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Remember me?
 Your request:
The Blast My eyes burn as I gaze upon the debris Still in shock, my ears so loudly ring The air I draw within my lungs nearly suffocates me I cannot allow this confusion, this perplexity I must remember my training, I must persevere The smoke slowly dissipates making vision clear I see my unit fully intact, I say a tiny prayer How many angels moments ago, were standing with us, when we were standing there |
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well well come back!
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Remember me? Your request:
The Blast My eyes burn as I gaze upon the debris Still in shock, my ears so loudly ring The air I draw within my lungs nearly suffocates me I cannot allow this confusion, this perplexity I must remember my training, I must persevere The smoke slowly dissipates making vision clear I see my unit fully intact, I say a tiny prayer How many angels moments ago, were standing with us, when we were standing there 
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Remember me? Your request:
The Blast My eyes burn as I gaze upon the debris Still in shock, my ears so loudly ring The air I draw within my lungs nearly suffocates me I cannot allow this confusion, this perplexity I must remember my training, I must persevere The smoke slowly dissipates making vision clear I see my unit fully intact, I say a tiny prayer How many angels moments ago, were standing with us, when we were standing there Well Damn I had to check the date to make sure i was not seeing things,, Welcome home,, Its been way to long
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Ty both
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