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*A Special Poem dedicated to misty4ran for all her help and assistance over the last few days. These words come from my heart.*
How do I express in words the gratitude I feel You commented on every single word that I revealed You deserve half the credit for helping me pulling it off Your constant replies gave fire & support to help finish my task Without your help, I may have simply been stuck in a trough So, to you my new found friend, I raise up my pen up high And thank you from the central part deep in side my soul You really are a kindred spirit, I'm glad you were here to fill the role Sincerely, ~Den |
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4. Echoes in the night Hope you enjoy it C, and remember YOU TWO gave me that nickname I lift my dress, trying to run as fast as I can go I’m not sure what that noise was, heartbeats begin to flow It seems the sound is trailing me, faster, I must run I look over my shoulder, my hands trembling with fear Suddenly I stop in place, I see my husband there! Blood dripping off the huge sharp knife he’s holding in his hand Memory returns to me, the whole thing he had planned... He killed me out of rage and anger, my throat he coldly sliced I realize that the sound of my screams are the echoes in the night ~Den this one gave me chills. thanks! |
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omg ,, i came to check up to see what and who had come back to read the writings ,, and i find this beatiful piece for me ....
it had left me speecless for a minute ,,, i was in awe ,, i was not expecting anything like this at all .. i had so much fun last nite reading and waiting for the writing's to be done ... i had even told my friend texas that i felt like i was a critic judging your work ... it is beautiful ... i just wish more would come to read it .... i don't deserve any credit , this is a gift you have within yourself , and have shared with all of us ..... i feel honored that you have become my friend ,and you have even given me some insight that i was not aware of until i read it rite in front of me  you are gifted in more ways than you realize young man .... you will touch many people in your life time with just your presence and writings ... thank-you for being my friend ,,,,  misty 
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THANK YOU Den for the poem 'bout Doo Dawg
he is doin' alot better 
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4. Echoes in the night Hope you enjoy it C, and remember YOU TWO gave me that nickname I lift my dress, trying to run as fast as I can go I’m not sure what that noise was, heartbeats begin to flow It seems the sound is trailing me, faster, I must run I look over my shoulder, my hands trembling with fear Suddenly I stop in place, I see my husband there! Blood dripping off the huge sharp knife he’s holding in his hand Memory returns to me, the whole thing he had planned... He killed me out of rage and anger, my throat he coldly sliced I realize that the sound of my screams are the echoes in the night ~Den this one gave me chills. thanks! Truly my pleasure, thanks for reading and the nice comment! ~Den |
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omg ,, i came to check up to see what and who had come back to read the writings ,, and i find this beatiful piece for me .... it had left me speecless for a minute ,,, i was in awe ,, i was not expecting anything like this at all .. i had so much fun last nite reading and waiting for the writing's to be done ... i had even told my friend texas that i felt like i was a critic judging your work ... it is beautiful ... i just wish more would come to read it .... i don't deserve any credit , this is a gift you have within yourself , and have shared with all of us ..... i feel honored that you have become my friend ,and you have even given me some insight that i was not aware of until i read it rite in front of me you are gifted in more ways than you realize young man .... you will touch many people in your life time with just your presence and writings ... thank-you for being my friend ,,,, misty It is I who have the honor of YOUR friendship, and I really appreciate all your help and kind words!! ~Den |
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THANK YOU Den for the poem 'bout Doo Dawg he is doin' alot better Totally my pleasure and I'm VERY HAPPY to hear that he is doing better, positive energy has a way of producing positive effects sometimes. Glad to hear the good news bud ~Den |
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Impressive! Absolulately Great! Loved each and everyone. That was cool being able to do that alot of talent. Thank you Thank you, I didn't mean to miss you earlier, my eyes were about half open by the time I finished lol. Thank you very much for the nice words ~Den |
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Curious, combine them into a story - is this in your realm? Combine all the topics into one story do you mean? Bingo, Indeed I do mean that. |
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Edited by
Sitngrin
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Thu 03/06/08 08:26 AM
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Curious, combine them into a story - is this in your realm? Combine all the topics into one story do you mean? Bingo, Indeed I do mean that. now THAT is a tough request considering I'm more of a poet than a story writer, but I'll see if I can't throw it into a short story- trouble maker ~Den |
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Mua??????
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We'll hold off on the mua until I see if I have hair left after trying to piece this puzzle together
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Broken but saved by Grace
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Broken but saved by Grace Lost me there. Of course my brain is still partial Jello after the "Throw dodge balls at me until I write you 10 poems" night lol ~D |
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The color of the hair cannot cover the brain inside of that blond head ~Den that was a good one |
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The color of the hair cannot cover the brain inside of that blond head ~Den that was a good one *GRIN* Thank you ~D |
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omg ,, i came to check up to see what and who had come back to read the writings ,, and i find this beatiful piece for me .... it had left me speecless for a minute ,,, i was in awe ,, i was not expecting anything like this at all .. i had so much fun last nite reading and waiting for the writing's to be done ... i had even told my friend texas that i felt like i was a critic judging your work ... it is beautiful ... i just wish more would come to read it .... i don't deserve any credit , this is a gift you have within yourself , and have shared with all of us ..... i feel honored that you have become my friend ,and you have even given me some insight that i was not aware of until i read it rite in front of me you are gifted in more ways than you realize young man .... you will touch many people in your life time with just your presence and writings ... thank-you for being my friend ,,,, misty see!! I am not the only one that sees your true worth and appreciates you. You are a very special person dont you ever forget that. Dont make the Batman come up there lol 
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hehe, ego boosted x 12. Thanks! Needed that this day
~Den |
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The color of the hair cannot cover the brain inside of that blond head ~Den that was a good one this is a compliment right guys *GRIN* Thank you ~D |
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hi den ,, and all his fans , and admirers ::::
 am i understanding that you are going to make this into a story now ????  (all the poems combined ) ps . i know you can you do it 
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