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oh wow ,, it gave me gooseys ,, i could feel it that is beautiful ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() I'm very happy you liked it. Ok, back to work for me ![]() ~Den |
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it's beautiful
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Edited by
Sitngrin
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Tue 03/04/08 10:48 PM
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2. A man leaving his girlfriend for Iraq
As I board the bus to spend the next six months in a dirty, sandy Hell I look back at you one last time and “I love you” I hear you yell I smile at you, not letting you see all the inside fears Nothing makes me sadder than to your eyes with tears I fear that all the plans we have, the baby on the way Could end with just one bullet, intentional or stray I did however; dedicate my life to fight for the free and the brave Have no worries baby; I won’t come home in a grave I’ll step off a bus and rush immediately into your arms I’ll kiss your sweet lips, hold your soft hands, and protect you from all harm Semper Fi Xan, God's Speed ~Den |
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my best friend .. my dog is sick awwww misty , thanks for thinkin' of Doo Dawg ![]() ![]() |
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BROUGHT TEARS TO MY EYES ,, BUT HAD A HAPPY ENDING ,,, SO MANY DO NOT
LOVE IT ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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my best friend .. my dog is sick awwww misty , thanks for thinkin' of Doo Dawg ![]() ![]() THATS OK DC ,,, I JUST CAME ACROSS THIS AND BEEN THINKING ABOUT YOU AND THE DOO DAWG HE GONNA WRITE A BEAUTIFUL POEM FOR HIM KINDA LIKE A PRAYER ![]() |
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3. A board
I know you were correcting me, which I appreciate, but a board is a board is a board. Hope this isn’t BORING for you ![]() I once stood tall and mighty, taking 70 years to grow I look down at these humans, ripping me apart, bit by bit I soon find myself no longer standing, on my side I roll I am only half of me, my other half has been split I’m being pulled towards the water, my vision nearly lost I float down the river, to the right and left I’m tossed Everything is growing dark; I think my life I’ve lost Pieces of me shipped around the world, they brought to me my death What it is that they don’t see is that it also takes their breath ~Den |
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amazing
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Edited by
Sitngrin
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Tue 03/04/08 11:46 PM
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4. Echoes in the night
Hope you enjoy it C, and remember YOU TWO gave me that nickname I lift my dress, trying to run as fast as I can go I’m not sure what that noise was, heartbeats begin to flow It seems the sound is trailing me, faster, I must run I look over my shoulder, my hands trembling with fear Suddenly I stop in place, I see my husband there! Blood dripping off the huge sharp knife he’s holding in his hand Memory returns to me, the whole thing he had planned... He killed me out of rage and anger, my throat he coldly sliced I realize that the sound of my screams are the echoes in the night ~Den |
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wow , i am starting to see your versatile ,, wow you can maybe give stephen king some ideas
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5. She steps out of the forest green into the new dawn..
She steps out of the forest green and into the new dawn Breakfast flies right past her eyes she releases her long tongue Lazily and carelessly she swims around the pond She decides to spend some time on the lily; she’s yet to have her young She knows today begins the day to keep her breed alive The males growl, grunt and fight, just to see who wins the prize Then soon her tiny little tads are swimming right close at her side ~Den |
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awwww that is so kute
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Edited by
Sitngrin
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Wed 03/05/08 12:16 AM
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(((BIG HUGS FOR THE TEDDY BEAR))) I hope you enjoy it!
6. How many times… How many times have I forgotten to be happy just to wake up alive… How many times should I have listened when I thought I was being told lies… How many times should I have taken five minutes, just to call a good friend… How many times have I thought of that after their life ends… How many times have I looked back said only if I had… How many times have I let someone below me make me sad.. How many times have I given thanks for family and friends How many times have I pondered how I’ll be seen in the end… ~Den |
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so true
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Thank you, Misty for all the nice compliments, you and owl’s comments have been a great motivation factor for me. And DC, I hope this will bring you some comfort.
7. My Best friend and his sick dog My best friend, I feel your pain, and know that you suffer But Doo Dawg is a very rare breed, built to be much tougher Shed no tears for now; remember all of the wonderful times Many more times shall you have, in your lap he will climb I know his love and loyalty have stood by you for years Now he needs at your strongest, do not show him you have fears The energy you exhume to him will surely help him heal And soon enough he’ll be sitting there, begging for your meal ~Den |
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it's fabulous ,, i got tears in my eyes and a big smile ...
![]() i love it ![]() you are very kind ... thankyou very much misty ![]() |
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it's fabulous ,, i got tears in my eyes and a big smile ... ![]() i love it ![]() you are very kind ... thankyou very much misty ![]() Truly, my pleasure. I'm really happy that you loved it!!! ~Den |
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I hope you enjoy this interpretation of your words, wanttachat and that you enjoy it!
8. Cabin Fever How long has it been since I’ve been waiting here, the snow up past the door We brought in enough wood to last and fire at a roar Three weeks tops he promised me as he went to look for cattle I truly regret now that, but we had to make a decision I feel these walls are closing in; I’m stuck in my own prison My sanity it slowly flees as all outside is white I’ll spend another sleepless night, stuck here all alone I must be dreaming as I wake to hear a thunder Has God come down to take me from this world is what I wonder Then voices get louder and louder, the nearer they approach I hear the snow being pulled away; it must be pulled by coach Until at last I see the eyes with which I feel in love Cabin fever leaves me now, I thank the Lord above ~Den |
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more gooseys ,,,,,
clapping for you ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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9. What was that?
What was that he ask himself, taking his gun from his rack He looked around the room at all the animals he had attacked Endangered species was his least concern, he could always buy his way out He loved to hear their last scream, never offering them any mercy So what if others made new laws, he'd have exactly what he desired Suddenly, his knees went limp and his chest felt as if it were on fire Then all the pain and torment he had given to all, animal and human alike Stabbing at his soul, sharing their pain, and so would end his life *Rot in hell you evolutionary killer* - There I feel better ~Den |
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