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suicidal squirrels © Copyright 2008 Den Wedding. All Rights Reserved by Author. This is funny, and just KICKASS Den! lol.. good muse brother. |
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Ok Den.... I want you to know that I read the entire thread, and I'm all caught up now... (took like 30-40 minutes) which is nothing, compared to how fast you wrote them...
The most that I can say Den, which is saying a lot for me, Is, That I would like to meet you someday... really would. |
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Have to slap this back in My Topics.. or I'll lose it for pages...
So, that's what this post is for. |
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Ok Den.... I want you to know that I read the entire thread, and I'm all caught up now... (took like 30-40 minutes) which is nothing, compared to how fast you wrote them... The most that I can say Den, which is saying a lot for me, Is, That I would like to meet you someday... really would. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Wow....you're an impressive person FC. You are blessed with an aura of positively along with Vinny that truly do bring one's day up. I appreciate that you took all that time to read and compliment me, being such a talented poet yourself. Thank you. *- Extends his hand and gives him a hug -* |
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Not a problem at all Den...
You gotta check something out tho... Look at 300 dollars, in the regular poetry posts. (please) |
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Not a problem at all Den... You gotta check something out tho... Look at 300 dollars, in the regular poetry posts. (please) Incredible man, incredible ~Den |
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Edited by
Sitngrin
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Fri 03/14/08 06:44 AM
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have a new one.. take me to higher places.. Take me to higher places Armageddon had begun, due to their strength, some were chosen to fight Others, due to their speed, were chosen to carry souls to heaven by flight Massive explosions abound as Angels and Demons fought for the souls I had flown down quicker and quicker and had thus far retrieved the most Let it not be misunderstood that I had done this alone, and I had no time to boast Though immortal, we still could lose our existence and He had to orchestrate It would be thousands of years before his fallen Angels he could recreate The risks were high, but bound by an Oath, we went on and did our job I was sent to retrieve the soul of a mother and her child amongst a mob Carrying one soul could be taxing enough, but I could not let that child be destroyed I swept in with all my speed, grabbed them both in my arms and started to retreat I felt the pain of heat on my back, but I had to get them to heaven, my task I had to complete I took her higher and higher, her blue eyes starring into mine as my vision blurred I set her and her two year old down by the pearly gates, then suddenly it occurred I looked behind me and saw my wings were destroyed and I would soon lie dead She looked deep into my eyes, and my last image before I went was her kissing my forehead © Copyright 2008 Den Wedding. All Rights Reserved by Author. |
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Bravo my friend... ((((( Den )))))) I have so enjoyed reading each and everyone,,, I am in awe once again
![]() ![]() ![]() such an incredible way to wake up |
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WOW...I'm speechless! That doesn't happen very often!
TREMENDOUS! |
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"Take me to higher places" this one my friend was awesome great write
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Bravo my friend... ((((( Den )))))) I have so enjoyed reading each and everyone,,, I am in awe once again ![]() ![]() ![]() such an incredible way to wake up Thank you very much ((((LaMom))). I always appreciate you taking time to read my writes ![]() ~Den |
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WOW...I'm speechless! That doesn't happen very often! TREMENDOUS! You have me to the point of blushing now. Hehe, Thank you so very much for your kind words ![]() ~Den |
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"Take me to higher places" this one my friend was awesome great write ![]() ![]() ![]() (((TXG))) ![]() ![]() ![]() I'm really glad that you enjoyed it! |
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Why does it hurt, when I feel no pain?
I stand here in the cold rain, tears streaming down my face Never thought I’d find myself, standing here in this place I look up at your bedroom as the rain begins to pound Rain has me covered from head to toe, I cannot hear a sound I took my own life, to escape the hell of losing my sweet Elaine I shouldn’t be able to feel, so why does it hurt when I can feel no pain? © Copyright 2008 Den Wedding. All Rights Reserved by Author. |
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"Take me to higher places" this one my friend was awesome great write ![]() ![]() ![]() (((TXG))) ![]() ![]() ![]() I'm really glad that you enjoyed it! Shshshshshs Den I have enjoyed yours since day one all are excellent. You do have a way with words! ![]() |
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Another great one...sigh..You really are a tremendous writer.
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Another great one...sigh..You really are a tremendous writer. Thank you so much. Know a publisher? LOL ~D |
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() *takes a bow* Thank you so much! ![]() ![]() ~Den |
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Twice Baked Virgins
I went to hang out with some friends and found myself at a party We sat around drinking, smoking, laughing, the weed was hearty The more we sat and smoked and talked, secret details were revealed Some needed just to talk things out, and then found that they were healed Other info was also told, which brought to my face such a big grin Two of the ladies in the room, sitting next to me were both untouched virgins I smoked them up another time, twice now they’d been baked I took them both up to my room, having ice cream AND cake The experience was delightful; we had all had lots of fun Until one of the virgin’s Father walked in with a gun Running down the street half clothed, now that part WASN’T fun! © Copyright 2008 Den Wedding. All Rights Reserved by Author. |
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