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Topic: §\|tⁿ☻ FSH, hit me
Sitngrin Joined Tue 01/15/08 Posts: 1078	Mon 03/10/08 01:30 PM Edited by Sitngrin on Mon 03/10/08 01:33 PM
suicidal squirrels Suicidal Squirrels For generations upon generations we held this land, this territory Now man is cutting down our homes, to build buildings with multistory We had a meeting, our food is nearly gone, tell me what reason is there to go on? Now as we hear the loud noises that so quickly cut down our homes We refuse to keep running further and further away, we're too tired to roam And now we choose to take our own lives, before we allow man to drive us away Keep cutting down our homes, ecologically, it won't be long before YOU pay © Copyright 2008 Den Wedding. All Rights Reserved by Author.

shadow77 Joined Sun 02/17/08 Posts: 23707	Mon 03/10/08 01:32 PM
suicidal squirrels Suicidal Squirrels For generations up generations we held this land, this territory Now man is cutting down our homes, to build buildings with multistory We had a meeting, our food is nearly gone, tell me what reason is there to go on? Now as we hear the loud noises that so quickly cut down our homes We refuse to keep running further and further away, we're too tired to roam And now we choose to take our own lives, before we allow man to drive us away Keep cutting down our homes, ecologically, it won't be long before YOU pay © Copyright 2008 Den Wedding. All Rights Reserved by Author. That was good

Sitngrin Joined Tue 01/15/08 Posts: 1078	Mon 03/10/08 01:32 PM
suicidal squirrels Suicidal Squirrels For generations up generations we held this land, this territory Now man is cutting down our homes, to build buildings with multistory We had a meeting, our food is nearly gone, tell me what reason is there to go on? Now as we hear the loud noises that so quickly cut down our homes We refuse to keep running further and further away, we're too tired to roam And now we choose to take our own lives, before we allow man to drive us away Keep cutting down our homes, ecologically, it won't be long before YOU pay © Copyright 2008 Den Wedding. All Rights Reserved by Author. That was good Hehe, not to be cocky, but for the subject, I think I pulled that one off pretty well lol

shadow77 Joined Sun 02/17/08 Posts: 23707	Mon 03/10/08 01:34 PM
suicidal squirrels Suicidal Squirrels For generations up generations we held this land, this territory Now man is cutting down our homes, to build buildings with multistory We had a meeting, our food is nearly gone, tell me what reason is there to go on? Now as we hear the loud noises that so quickly cut down our homes We refuse to keep running further and further away, we're too tired to roam And now we choose to take our own lives, before we allow man to drive us away Keep cutting down our homes, ecologically, it won't be long before YOU pay © Copyright 2008 Den Wedding. All Rights Reserved by Author. That was good Hehe, not to be cocky, but for the subject, I think I pulled that one off pretty well lol yep only 3 minutes

shadow77 Joined Sun 02/17/08 Posts: 23707	Mon 03/10/08 01:36 PM
Ok new one for you snow covered mountains and rain fall. 2 of my favorite things

Sitngrin Joined Tue 01/15/08 Posts: 1078	Mon 03/10/08 03:03 PM
Ok new one for you snow covered mountains and rain fall. 2 of my favorite things Ominously, they looked up at the sky, filled with fog and offering very little sight They knew the climb would be hell, but with the weather, there was no chance for flight The plane had landed somewhere high upon the mountain deep in the snow There was little chance that any had survived, but it was worth the risk and it was their job to go The freezing rain pelted down on them but they were rescue workers and had taken all of the courses This particular group was also prior military, had made harder climbs and were all ex Special Forces They toiled slowly up the mountains, carrying at least 50 pounds of medical supplies Even if they only found one survivor, it would be worth the effort to save that one from demise After hours and hours of climbing, the located the wrecked plane stuck deep inside the snow The pilot had lost his life in the crash, but to their disbelief, fate had upon some of them their life bestowed Working quickly, diligently and with purpose, they pulled the four out and gave them medial aid Each was stabilized and ready for transport down the mountain, a trip not to be easily made But pure grit and determination had saved the lives of four people on this foggy day And upon return, the brave souls that climbed so high to save them received rounds of praise © Copyright 2008 Den Wedding. All Rights Reserved by Author.

shadow77 Joined Sun 02/17/08 Posts: 23707	Mon 03/10/08 03:05 PM
Ok new one for you snow covered mountains and rain fall. 2 of my favorite things Ominously, they looked up at the sky, filled with fog and offering very little sight They knew the climb would be hell, but with the weather, there was no chance for flight The plane had landed somewhere high upon the mountain deep in the snow There was little chance that any had survived, but it was worth the risk and it was their job to go The freezing rain pelted down on them but they were rescue workers and had taken all of the courses This particular group was also prior military, had made harder climbs and were all ex Special Forces They toiled slowly up the mountains, carrying at least 50 pounds of medical supplies Even if they only found one survivor, it would be worth the effort to save that one from demise After hours and hours of climbing, the located the wrecked plane stuck deep inside the snow The pilot had lost his life in the crash, but to their disbelief, fate had upon some of them their life bestowed Working quickly, diligently and with purpose, they pulled the four out and gave them medial aid Each was stabilized and ready for transport down the mountain, a trip not to be easily made But pure grit and determination had saved the lives of four people on this foggy day And upon return, the brave souls that climbed so high to save them received rounds of praise © Copyright 2008 Den Wedding. All Rights Reserved by Author. now that was very nice

silverwaya Joined Sun 01/20/08 Posts: 1049	Mon 03/10/08 03:38 PM
that was yet another good one Den you are so awesome love ya' SuperMan

Sitngrin Joined Tue 01/15/08 Posts: 1078	Mon 03/10/08 03:42 PM
that was yet another good one Den you are so awesome love ya' SuperMan MUAH! Thank you for the nice words,

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76412	Mon 03/10/08 05:48 PM
You are on a roll my friend awesome writes indeed loved them all.

Sitngrin Joined Tue 01/15/08 Posts: 1078	Mon 03/10/08 06:38 PM
You are on a roll my friend awesome writes indeed loved them all. Thank you very much my friend! ~Den (PSSST, Den posted new pics)

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76412	Mon 03/10/08 06:46 PM
You are on a roll my friend awesome writes indeed loved them all. Thank you very much my friend! ~Den (PSSST, Den posted new pics) Hehehhe your just trying to get everyone to perv your profile shshshsh yeah I did but honey ya don't have to take off your shirt to look good

Sitngrin Joined Tue 01/15/08 Posts: 1078	Mon 03/10/08 06:58 PM
Thank you.......I think? ~Den

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76412	Mon 03/10/08 07:02 PM
Thank you.......I think? ~Den Well Den if that don't make them climb the walls to get to you then leave them on the other side for they are brainless and blind lol

Sitngrin Joined Tue 01/15/08 Posts: 1078	Mon 03/10/08 07:09 PM
Thank you.......I think? ~Den Well Den if that don't make them climb the walls to get to you then leave them on the other side for they are brainless and blind lol

silverwaya Joined Sun 01/20/08 Posts: 1049	Mon 03/10/08 07:19 PM
amen!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Sitngrin Joined Tue 01/15/08 Posts: 1078	Mon 03/10/08 07:30 PM
amen!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thank you kindly Ma'am ~SUPERMAN lol

Sitngrin Joined Tue 01/15/08 Posts: 1078	Mon 03/10/08 07:48 PM Edited by Sitngrin on Mon 03/10/08 07:48 PM
i have a sentence angel smiles and untouch feeling how about that? And I have a poem for your sentence. I hope you enjoy it! Untouched feelings bring Angels to smile Though you are so very away, I feel your feelings through your words Feelings, without ever being touch, like a sound is there, but never heard I find myself drifting into your eyes, so deep, so real, so much life If only there was a way for us to be together, if only for just one night I'd embrace you deep in my arms and shower upon you all of my love God would send down Angels, first in the form of beautiful white doves Then invisibly they would surround us and feel the love that we have And feelings of love that oh so strong would make them so very glad A smile would appear on all their faces, their hearts filled with delight Then eternally I'd give to you myself, not only for just the one night © Copyright 2008 Den Wedding. All Rights Reserved by Author.

starre_74 Joined Sat 10/27/07 Posts: 132	Mon 03/10/08 08:43 PM
Absolutely beautiful my friend :)

Sitngrin Joined Tue 01/15/08 Posts: 1078	Mon 03/10/08 08:45 PM
Absolutely beautiful my friend :) Thank you very much!! I appreciate it. ~Den