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  Another good one there Den Thank you, true story that one. Oh well, anyone else interested in a diamond in the middle of a field of coal? ~D |
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have a new one..
take me to higher places.. |
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Hmm.... ok, I finally got suckered into this thread, but only because I keep seeing that it was started by Den...
and, I'm sad to say, that I only looked at page 14, and 15... to see if I could catch the gist of it... But, I think I got some sorta gist, rather it's the right one or not... lol. Ok Den... Must be looking for challenges... I would like to hmmmmmm.... think about this for a second. hold on... cause I know Den wants something Challenging. Ok... Here's the topic, in General... Why does it hurt, when I don't feel any pain? Lets see the masterpiece, that I know you can turn this simple, (hopefully challenging, but maybe stupid, lmao) line/idea/theme into. Lol... If I didn't get the gist of the string right, let me know what's going on, and I'll try to play to that tune... ha ha. (If nothing else, I'll be checking back on this thread periodically, to see what the response is...) Haven't seen you in awhile Den... Hope life is treating you well... And, even though I've known you for just a short time... I really miss your style. (character) |
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Your Mistake I saw your cute picture, your red hair and your blue eyes I spent three hours of time talking to you, enjoying your voice You deserve an academy award for your performance that night I thought the next day, after the way we’d talked, we’d have no choice But to make contact as early as possible, thinking you liked me as I did you Turns out you decided to be dumb and blow off the best of the brew Don’t think for a second that letting go of you caused me any pain Hell, truth be told, you’d probably do little more than complain I offered to be there for you for your insecurities and pain of the past You decided against having me in your corner, a mistake that will last and last I KNOW what value I have, I know that I am a great person with so many qualities I hope you enjoy your hole you live in, I tried to help you out; someday you’ll see And then you’ll realize in the end what it is you threw away like yesterday’s trash You’ll be wishing you had a nice guy like me when you hit the ground and crash You’ll eventually find that you had a diamond surrounded by a pile of rocks But hey when you finally realize what a damn fool you were, you can just…….well you know the rest © Copyright 2008 Den Wedding. All Rights Reserved by Author. ok was that a cathartic release or what? yet it was very well written of course. You always do wo wonderful job and yeah she will see that one day she was a fool |
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so, you want to write some more eh?
need a topic...........hhhmmmm let me see how about the endless void never to be filled but by one, let's see if you can get that one right lol you should know what i am talking about love ya C~ 
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Lol.... twice baked virgins?
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Pinky- Take me to higher places.. Will be done
FC - Why does it hurt, when I don't feel any pain? - Twice baked virgins Both will be done And yes FC, this is where I have been spending my time. I've been up for challenges lately. You should go back and try to read them all on this thread to see some of the challenges I've had, but if you don't have the time, I did do a compilation of ALL my work, new and old at: http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/92167 Cyn- The Endless Void Never To Be Filled But By One. Will be done Love ya all! ~Den |
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 Hey my friend don't forget the one I asked for Have good day you.
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http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/92167?page=2
Poem "Reach out my friend" - already done :-) (no comments in that thread please) ~Den |
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that takes me to another world for a time, your world! good stuff! not done though, i'll read the rest later....
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Hummm okay here's ya some;
As the Eagle Soars. The Kiss. Keep Your Eye On The Eight Ball. (could not resist that one)  Take your pic if you like. |
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Have been checking out the thread Den... You are indeed a man who rises to the challenge...
Can't wait, to see what you turn out, with these latest suggestions... |
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that takes me to another world for a time, your world! good stuff! not done though, i'll read the rest later.... Thank you much, V, I appreciate the positive comments and positive aura you send my way. Thank you. ~Den |
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Have been checking out the thread Den... You are indeed a man who rises to the challenge... Can't wait, to see what you turn out, with these latest suggestions... Thanks a lot brother, I really appreciate that. Hopefully I can live up to the expectations!    ~Den |
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~Den |
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Pinky - Take me to higher places.. Will be done
FC - Why does it hurt, when I don't feel any pain? - Twice baked virgins Both will be done Cyn - The Endless Void Never To Be Filled But By One. Will be done For my Texan - As the Eagle Soars Sorry, haven't gotten started, been a very busy day. I'll crank out what I can tonight. Thanks guys! ~Den |
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Broken but saved by Grace Lost me there. Of course my brain is still partial Jello after the "Throw dodge balls at me until I write you 10 poems" night lol ~D Lol... Hey Den... I'm somewhere in the middle of this giant post, after the first 10 poems, but not yet onto the next... When, I stumbled upon this one, that doesn't seem to have been answered yet... (cause I think she was giving a title, or a line) just thought you might like to know... In the next few pages, this problem may already be remedied! lOl.. I'll find out... But, the first ten poems, and the context that they were written in/and out of... was simply, greatly, fantastic... I can't remember exactly, but I think the third one really caught my notice... That's all for now... see you when I catch up... (Yeah, you're worth it) |
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how can any one hate snow it's beautiful .. You ever lived in Colorado and tried to drive in 2 feet of snow? LOL Used to live in Alamosa Co... and it was a little more then two feet... You could stand at the bus stop in the morning, and break your hair off with your hand! |
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A Survivor of Child Molestation © Copyright 2008 Den Wedding. All Rights Reserved by Author. This was a very delicate subject Den... and you mastered it powerfully well. |
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